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Reviews for Bruises

By : KCBailey
  • From ANON - Courtney on January 03, 2006
    I really liked this, especially the different spin you put on the story. (Well duh since it's AU *lol*) Anywho, I really hope you make a sequel. Pretty please with sugar on top? ^_^
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  • From Crytok on August 26, 2005
    Well.. It was original, but very OOC.. I know, you proolly hadn't played it but you know.. -coughc- Um..
    It made Raziel rather femme-like.. I mean a ssoldier back in those days wouldn't cry over stuff like that, espeically with how well he fights.. Um.. IIt was a good story, i read it all the way through, but it was so dramatically 'yaoi'.. I mean i know the Romians used heterosexuals in there army so when their love dies, revenge is emmitent, but this was just like he found the easy way out with his vampiric lover who will save him from it all.. Not very Kain-ish.. um.. But It would be a great Vampire Hunter D story!

    I really don't know how to put it.. Not a flame, just a kinda 'What is this?' thingy in a positive light. -paws and gives a chocolate chip cookie for trying- Take care, your writting is still lovely and perfectly composed with detailing. I wasn't at all confused by the actions he made, just the change of personality..
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  • From ANON - Ulla on July 29, 2005
    This fic was fantastic! Actually, it was so great, that I think it would work greatly as an original story, if you change the names of the places and characters and make it longer :)
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  • From ANON - Chantel on June 29, 2005
    I think you are doing a really good job so far. I like the approach you are taking with Kain and Raziel's relationship. It's no big deal messing around with facts and data, because if everybodies' stories were so alike, they would be boring!
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  • From ANON - Shalina on May 13, 2005
    THat has to be one of the best LoK fic i have ever read Honestly its just brilliant VER VERY VEYR well done would love to read more if there is any but Yes all up and exellant fic... Wording writing everything just stunning ^_^ keep up the wonderfull work
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  • From ANON - Kodaijin Hiei(grr it unsigned me in) on January 25, 2005
    Hey, please sequal? -whimper, beg-
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  • From ANON - no_more_yogurt on December 25, 2004
    I WANT SEQUEL!!!!! It was terrific and divine!!! You write really great ^^ "...sequel! sequel! sequel!..." :]
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  • From ANON - ILoveKain on October 24, 2004
    yep....good stuff.....good stuff
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  • From ANON - Redrum on October 12, 2004
    This was excellent and so IC. I love the ending. It's rare to find happy fics in this fandom, so I read all I can, though I am fairly new to the fandom (if you know of any good yaoi sites with this pairing, I'd love to hear them). I like how you have Raziel denying it all until the very end.

    Is there any images of or Raziel before he's turned into a vampire? Or is he always that pale with black lips?

    I hope you do write a sequel, even if it's just a tiny oneshot.
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  • From ANON - ..... on July 25, 2004
    the ending made me cry. coulcould zephon be SO mean? but stories that make you cry are a lot better than stories that make you laugh, from my pov anyway. i like many others have played all of the games, and it was fantastically written none-the-less. during all of the fighting, i just kept wondering, were they just suppose to die since they couldn't hurt Raziel? but it was great! it made me cry!
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  • From ANON - Limpet666 on July 18, 2004
    Yee!! i loved it! And strangely enough it actually had a decent story line too, unlike other stories out there who just concentrate on the sex. Seriously they bug me, it's like "whats the point in that, great so two (or more) people do it, it's not like that doesnt happen everyday!" Lol, i hope you do write a sequal, it's great!
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  • From ANON - Kain\'s Queen on June 18, 2004
    OOOOOOOOhhhhhhhh i absolutely love this story and has been earmarked now as my favourite erotic story :D i would so love to see a sequal to this!! I love the way Kain appears tender and loving towards Raziel which in my opinion is exactly how they were. But then that's just me ;)
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  • From ANON - Re-run on April 10, 2004
    Damn review thingie cut off the last bit. Keep AUs alive, write on, and eat your vegetables. *Re-run*
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  • From ANON - Re-run on April 10, 2004
    This is probably my tenth time reading this story. I come back every so often to read it n, in, it's that good! Your descriptions were very good and short, which is how I like descriptions to be. There wasn't a single error in the story! You can't imagine how refreshing that is. I'll be reading along and suddenly I'm lost because the person left out some crucial words or, this is the worst, decided to randomly switch from first person to third person. I'm a big fan of AU (you should read MY version of Pokemon! No...no, you shouldn't. Yes, I'm a Pokemon whore) and I'm also a big fan of LoK (though I pretty much just discovered it...). I reallyreallyreally like how you portrayed Kain! He was just...I dunno...so...yay.
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  • From ANON - KittuPaladin on March 23, 2004
    I think you did a nice job. I want to see if there's a sequel now... ja ne!
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