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Reviews for Fulfillment

By : bigtrw
  • From ryu2301 on January 09, 2006
    Very interesting fic so far. Honestly; you need to add some better variety to your lemon scenes and work on your grammar a bit. I suggest getting someone to beta read your fics and fix any errors before you post them from now on. Other than that I look forward to see where your fic is going. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - kyle on July 03, 2005
    its a good story but it needes to be continued and finished
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on November 28, 2004
    This si one of my favortie games from PLaystation! You did such a good job, but to me I'd think that Alex would be the more domineering one instead of Luna. Oh well... you still did a fantastic job. Now if I could only find a copy of the game, I'd start to play it again. If you need some ideas for this fanfic or another one, don't hesitate to email me.
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  • From ANON - Ryu from ff.net on April 26, 2004
    Hey, I remember reviewing this back when it was on ff.net. I think of it the same now as I did before. However, where's the rest of the story?


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  • From ANON - LionHeart823 on February 29, 2004
    Dude...this is awesome. I LOVE LUNAR GAMES! They are almost as good as Final Fantasy games. Whatever...just update...this is awesome!!!!!
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  • From ANON - tttt on June 23, 2003
    you are missing the ret of the story
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  • From ANON - MistressKassandra on January 26, 2003
    Um.. do you realize that this story just stops? Right in the middle of a damned sentence? Any way this can be remedied so we know where the hell you're going with this and how it turns out?
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