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Reviews for Necromancer

By : suspect501
  • From Marianne on June 16, 2006
    Awesome idea....I loved the concept...it's very unique...also I liked the descriptions...the way you used the words to make up the story....you shouldn't let yourself down on this fic...to my opinion it's really good...good job^^
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  • From ANON - Homunculus on October 15, 2004
    *is soooo amused* I like this story. I was quite interesting, and a bit humorous, though I have a rather sick sence of humor. I was good though. Nice writing style and good idea to boot. ^^ Good job.
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  • From suspect501 on March 11, 2004
    ^^^ I'm going to take your suggestion seriously. I can't begin to thank you enough for your kind criticism! You're right about Kain's perspective. I should have smoremore. The story is really about him (err.. me?! ^_^;;).

    Thank you anyone who has read it and enjoyed it! Expect a better draft coming in!
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  • From ANON - pravus on March 11, 2004
    beautifully-woven story. liked the way the forbidden-fruit idea was tied in with Kain's methodical blasphemy.

    more could have been said about the act of defiling the crypt instead of physically describing it. perhaps a mental dimension could be added? like the exploration of Kain's thoughts during the process? this would serve to enrich the defiling scene and evoke a stronger sense of hatred/vengeance/sardonicism.

    overall, a pleasure to read.
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  • From ANON - Kia on March 06, 2004
    A bit sick, but very good! I'm so gald I found this!
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  • From ANON - Millenia on March 06, 2004
    I Love this story!! Kain and Raziel forever!! hee hee, I would have liked it even better if there was some more love and passion though ^^ Please write more!!!!!
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