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Reviews for Isaac/Sheba

By : Mikaa
  • From ThePairingGuy on December 04, 2008
    This story should have been titled "Instant Rebound". No sooner has Isaac lost Jenna than he's in bed with a near-total stranger - and the same with Sheba! It's even scarier given that neither of them were having relations with their previous beloveds, so the rebound is stronger than the original throw! Seriously, this is like passing a note saying "Be my valentine" to the girl in front of you in class, getting a note saying "Get lost" back... and then as soon as the bell rings, you grab the girl sitting to your left and start screwing.

    In general, both Isaac and Sheba come off as childish, whiny, and thoroughly pathetic.

    The lemon is pretty flat, too. Not bad, but it easily pales before other fics in this section, especially "Moments" and "Sins of the Flesh".

    I saw this fic and thought it might be different from The Insanity and The Hunted... well, it is, but it's not better.
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  • From ANON - Cyberchao X on September 28, 2008
    It was good. It's interesting that you should mention the Felix/Sheba couple, since I haven't seen a single Felix/Sheba on this entire damn site (much to my chagrin). Keep up the good work!
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  • From Generation on September 01, 2007
    Don't listen to the other punks who have reviewed you story! There's nothing wrong with the Isaac/Sheba pairing. In fact, thank you for writing something different than the usual stuff.
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  • From ANON - ???????? on June 20, 2006
    mooore brilliant. can u write one about ivan and sheba not a sequal or pre-qual but a separate story about them.
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  • From ANON - -- on December 05, 2004
    the excessive spaces confused me.
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  • From ANON - Lum (Surprised?) on July 04, 2004
    Wow. I'm sorry nobody else reviewed this. Thought the pairing was VERY odd I did like this story. I beleiev that any paring can work if there is enough proof and you did this one very well. And remember a famous Latin Phrase.

    Illegitimus Non Carborundum

    Don't let the bastards grind you down

    Keep up the good work!
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