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Reviews for Personal Demons

By : Eline
  • From LexisMatapan on May 14, 2009
    This is perhaps one of your most moving stories. Between "Our Truth", "Blasphemy" and this particular fic, I can't decide which one I love the most. Your writing is *amazing*, well-worded and incredibly powerful. The sheer despair I could feel in Vallewida's thoughts forced me to stop reading a few times - simply to blink my tears away.
    The French exclamations were a clever idea; that single 'Dieu!' when Vallewida orgasms was haunting. With this man being a Christian, I don't believe that was a cry of pleasure. It sounded more like a cry for mercy coming from his real self trapped in the "whore's" body.
    Great fic, great scene.
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  • From ANON - Kei on August 04, 2004
    Cool! An Enzai fic! ::remembers the paint scene:: The POV was written well and the story was pretty intersting tan Van Vallewida in that scene. Your style is attention grabbing. I hope you will continue to write more.
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