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Reviews for Remembered Gods

By : Light7
  • From Zephon on September 19, 2004
    Such angst! You really love making your characters suffer, ne? First Sebastian und now poor Janos... shame on you (not really...)! I really liked the description of Janos's emtions and the way he deals with the situation considering the Hylden. What I also must praise is that you use the text from BO2 and the way it always fits in perfectly with what your characters are feeling and the situations they have suffered. I'm so happy that you've decided to write more and eagerly await your next story.
    P.S. I have to praise your Kain again. He's so delicious!
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  • From ANON - Smoke on September 18, 2004
    Ooh, ah. Um. Wow. On one hand, at least Vorador is still alive for the moment. On the other hand, so is Janos, and Vorador's last words to him were, "I will never forgive you." *grimace* At least Janos doesn't have to deal with the added burden of Vorador's death. I like how you're mentioning that Janos notices how the Reaver is better suited to Kain than Raziel. Also a nice touch how Janos' hatred is partially because of the familiarity between him and Hash. (SL, HL whatever is popular to call him.)
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  • From Zephon on September 16, 2004
    Another great chapter and off the bat, I must agree with Smokey that it was only logical that Janos would still be hurt from the abuse he suffered, and that Vorador's touch would be the only one to give him some comfort. Your intetatetation of the characters are always very... good? At least I can say that they match exactly that what I think of them, if that means anything ^.^ Please keep writing and I will look for your updates... 3 times... a day?
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  • From ANON - Smoke on September 13, 2004
    It doesn't feel fake. It's right that their reunion would be tainted, but also that Vorador's touch would "heal" him. That part where Janos forgot his pants was pretty cool. I don't know where he got them, but he's been naked for years as the beast. I noticed some spelling errors, but I can't see them from this screen. "insanity" I think should be "insanely" Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Smoke on September 12, 2004
    I love how you're filling the gaps that were left in the original story. It makes sense that Janos would have some sort of light telepathy, that's the only way he would know about sanctuary. And the smell is probably the best way for Janos to know that Vorador is alive. It makes sense as well that they would not pick up where they left off. Janos was raped, and it's hard to imagine that they're going to get to any sort of slash at all. At least in the time that they have left. Though what you decide is for you.
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  • From Zephon on September 09, 2004
    This was an excellentpterpter and I loved the way Janos is still under pain. It's so realistic that he still suffers from the torture that I really felt along with him. And his consideration with Vorador was so very touching. I forgot to mention in my last review that I am very flatterd that a part of the dedication if for me and I thank you for it. LoK forever!
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  • From ANON - Anne Shard on September 04, 2004
    Well, you seem to be getting better with every story you post! :) Thank you for mentioning me in the dedications (wow, I feel special! :)), and I can't wait for more!
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  • From Zephon on September 04, 2004
    This was a very touching chapter, and I really felt for Janos and his pain. I loved the part where he recognized Voradors scent on Kain and the elation it gave him. are you going to post more chapters for this story? If so... then soon! *yay*
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  • From ANON - Smoke on September 03, 2004

    So many stories are simply about smut. I think what you're doing here is an actual story which, uncomfortable for some, contains some very disturbing things. Janos has had a painful handful of centuries after everything else he's been through. It's more like 400 years, I thought, but that difference is minor since I doubt that Janos is able to keep very good track.
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