Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Wind Feeds Fire

By : Elysia
  • From ANON - Good Luck on January 08, 2010
    To my knowledge, FFNet still allows yaoi-centric stories. They just do not allow NC-17 stories anymore. Now, Dart/Albert is an interesting pairing and I think the set-up is interesting as well. Though, like another reviewer said, you should make the chapters longer and bunch the sentences together until they resemble paragraphs. A few spelling mistakes are present too.

    All the LoD fics have been left unfinished on here, so I’m doubtful you’ll come back with your friend Mishaela, but I wanted to add my two cents anyways.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Une on September 18, 2005
    mm~~~ more! I was so glad when I saw this story, I'd thought this pairing to be far more obvious o.o;;;
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Dannie Yoko on May 15, 2005
    Argh!Cliffhanger!Please continue!L.o.D fics aer hard to find!*offers pockey*Please continue yas story!^ ^
    Report Review

  • From Yamima on May 04, 2005
    Wow, I never placed that couple,

    continue
    Report Review

  • From somadrop on January 29, 2005
    I think I read this once, long ago... It's familiar.

    At any rate, I'm dropping a line because it seems no one else would. For constructive critisism, you've too many spaces between paragraphs, I think. It breaks things up a bit too much. But elsewise, it's a good start. Why don't you continue?
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!