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Reviews for Turned On

By : blackwaltz0
  • From ANON - Heather on June 09, 2010
    Wow, what a great story. The writing is very well done and the characters are in character. I look forward to the next update!
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  • From Umegaki on April 04, 2010
    Okay, I admit it - this turned out to be a huge surprise for me. I went into it just looking for a good read to pass some time, and it provided far better than I was ever expecting. The mix of humor and seriousness kept me literally on the edge of my seat the more I read, the pacing of emotions was absolutely perfect for dragging me into the story but not getting me frustrated with any one type of scene lasting for too terribly long, and by the time I hit the later chapters I just couldn't tear myself away. I laughed, I cried (just a wee bit, with relief and glee at Raja's blessing kicking in), I wanted to throttle some of them when they were being exceptionally dense, I think I even said out loud to the screen at one point "Now THAT is a Crowning Moment of Awesome." (Hard to remember - I was honestly THAT into it.) Having just recently got into this fandom myself, I am extremely pleased to have found this fic - it's very well done and does excellent justice to everyone involved.

    And you gave me plotbunnies, damn you. :)

    Long story short (heh, I ramble) - awesome fic, keep it up. :D
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  • From ANON - falselightluna on December 25, 2006
    I just want to say thank you for this fic. I love the story, the style, the flow, and I especially love that someone finally wrote a PSIV fic of this pairing -- and a great one at that. I've been following it on ff.net and I just had to write something when I saw it here. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2006
    I can't believe it, well written PS IV yaoi with Chaz and WREN of all people! Excellent, excellent stuff too. I had a huge crush on Wren back in the day (way back) so this is just fantastic. I'm trying not to squeal too much but god, I love you right now! I'd love to see more chapters if you feel like writing them. :)
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  • From ANON - Ashi Taiyouno on July 29, 2006
    *cheers, cheers, and more cheers* YES! I thought it'd be the end of forever until I found a Phantasy Star fic with lemony filling...let alone, that it'd be absolutely EXCELLENT! You have no idea, I've loved PS since before I even knew what the internet was (wow, that's either dating me or showing my stupidity :p ) and now I find this tasty little tidbit among the jetsam of many, many fics!

    Technically, this was very well written...obviously, since I don't have too much patience with people who don't know what periods and spaces are. Beyond that, it was so true to the characters I found myself seeing all the scenes written in context to the game. This is a very excellent fic; to the author, KEEP WRITING, PLEASE!...to any potential readers, you'd better read this unless you want me to sic Myau on you...*RWAR!*

    :D
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