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Reviews for Who I Really Am

By : Chaosdreamer
  • From ANON - darkangel1211 on October 05, 2014
    Bloody brilliant! Just the thing I've been looking for; a perfect blend of dub-con, dark themes and hot sex with the best ending ever!
    Bookmarked for future reads xxx
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  • From yaminoyume on July 02, 2008
    Wow, I loved this. It was amazing. xD Thanks for the wonderful fic. I enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - HonNVin on January 14, 2007
    "Bitch" reviews: Look, if you're going to use "big" words, at least use them properly. Your writing style is juvenile, idiotic, and unrealistic. Get a fucking BETA.

    Oh TSK. Tsk, tsk, tsk. First of all, if you're going to use "quotes", use *them* properly. It's best if you say "...if you're going to use "big words", at least..." Otherwise, it looks like your only emphasis is "big", not the words.
    It's fun to be overly critical, but I'm sure you're aware of this.
    I've read some absolutely terrible fics before... and this simply isn't one of them. It's no War and Peace, but what is? Juvenile, idiotic and unrealistic? It's video-game fic. It's kind of... *supposed* to be unrealistic. That's the linch pin of this whole story in and of itself. The first two "BIG WORDS! OMG!" you used, 'juvenile and idiotic'... point out exactly what *is* idiotic, if you will. Or is that just a "big INSULT", rather than trying to show off your vernacular?

    It's funny to say this, 'cause it's not an insult: Bitch, *please*. Offer something constructive to a story that is just fine, and needs a skosh of helpful criticism.
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  • From ANON - Hotuko on January 14, 2007
    Oh, I love all your fics, I didn’t even know that silent hill slash existed, and thanks to you now I love the fandom.
    Don’t mind bad reviews, they are immature, she is the one that needs a beta, and for something that simple as two lines, her english is worse than mine and I am Mexican speaking Spanish all the time.
    kisses
    keep writing
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  • From ANON - Bitch on January 10, 2007
    Look, if you're going to use "big" words, at least use them properly. Your writing style is juvenile, idiotic, and unrealistic. Get a fucking BETA.
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  • From ANON - Dahlia's Bitch on January 09, 2007
    Wow, that was neat how they made James into their slave. Good work!
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  • From ANON - Udyjay on November 25, 2006
    *o* ... Woow. That was.. so cool. And hawt. Muah.
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  • From ANON - ix-tab on November 23, 2006
    I've read this several times now, but have only now just realised that I hadn't reviewed, and for that I apologise.

    I really love this. This is an ending that I didn't see coming, and it makes things so much more twisted to read, with James not being the victim. So very good.

    I am having creepy fangirl love for your writing. Don't mind me! ;p

    For me, the real kicker in this fic is seeing Sin in action against Alfred. It's my favourite section. Not really sure why, except that I'm just in awe of it's awesomeness.
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  • From ANON - SakuraSan101 on October 28, 2006
    Excellent story. I think I'm starting to become a fan of yours. :3 You are a genius, a God...Or Goddess. Whether gal or guy, you are some form of heavenly deity. You have a lot of talent. Maybe you should write some original stories, get them published, make a living out of it. I'd certainly buy any literary work from you if you did. Excellent job.
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  • From ANON - Lilalou on October 07, 2006
    I'm becoming a real fan of your works on Silent Hill, and this one is no exception. You know how to write scenes which are both really erotic and scary, one of the things I prefer in a fanfic.
    I haven't reviewed your other two fics yet because I skipped some parts while reading ; but what I read really hooked me, I hope you will continue both of them.
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  • From ANON - clthomas on September 20, 2006
    I really loved this story, it was well written and the sex scenes were the best. I hope to see more from you, you did good.
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  • From ANON - Esta on September 12, 2006
    I think it was bloody great^^ Infact I think you should write more smutty scence of the PM's doin it with little Jamie ^-^
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  • From ANON - blade_tatsuhiko on September 12, 2006
    I really liked it, actually.
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  • From ANON - zuka on September 10, 2006
    i'm really sad it ended i wish you would right more and thats saying something sence i dont usually read rated R fics. good job i liked ift very much even this is my third time reading it.^_^ i really like it good job again.^_^
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  • From maiafay376 on September 10, 2006
    I see you posted here. Good. As I said on shslash, this is nicely written and that girls( or guys) reaction should not chase you away from the fandom. I think you have talent, and should grace the SH universe with more stories. Good Work.
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