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Reviews for Hell is repetition

By : Sionnan
  • From netherlady on September 17, 2008
    I love your writing style and I extremely fascinated by the way you have explored Vladimir‘s mind reveling his pain and shame.

    Leaving Woden’s presence shaded was a great artistic touch since it has emphasized Vladimir‘s suffer and elevated it beyond the physical level. For me, Woden’s abuse of Vlad can be seen as the whole world’s abuse of the Russian mob leader. Don’t ask me for an explanation but that what I have felt when I read the story. Also, the woman appearing at the end has touched me greatly in a mysterious way that I cannot put it in words.

    You have chosen a nice and unexplored part of Max Payne series by writing about Vlad and Alfred’s relation that was left enigmatic and open for speculations. I seriously recommend that you take it further and write multi-chapter story since I am sure it will be amazing and artistically matured.

    Don’t be discouraged by the lack of reviews though. This was simply because that the game is not that popular between fanfiction readers whom the majority of them are females. Poor girls, if they knew what a great tragic and emotional game Max Payne is they will be rushing playing it even if it were a pure action game. I salute you for having the courage and the enthusiasm to write about such unpopular game.

    Thank you greatly for this story; I’ll forever remember it.

    Good Luck & Bye ^_^

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