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Reviews for Tomb Raider: The Fat Man Chronicles

By : MorbidFantasy
  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2015
    Not a bad idea. Good chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2015
    MOMMY!!!!! Grow up Sailor. LMAO.
    Nice change up. I've read too many spineless Lara rape comics
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2015
    You aren't going to like this ultimatly anyway sailor. You do know she wins in the end right? He isn't writing this for you, or any of the Gordo hating crowd. He has a plan, and it works. Let the man write HIS story... fuck sake you guys are worse than the assholes plauging JustS.
    I love the new direction. This is after all a Tomb Raider story. I for one was bored shitless with the fuck doll chronicals
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2015
    Sailor. Be a good spaz and write your own
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  • From ninesenshi on April 01, 2015
    No, no, no, please no. I have no problem if you want to back off on the extreme, over the top abuse you have been dishing out; it has gotten rather comic-bookish. But having Lara `take charge' is right out. I want to see her dominated and possessed, not the one on top in any sense. If you are going to go this way you should just end the fic. If you want to dial things back, have some disaster happen which puts Lara into the hands of a new owner. Someone who will use her in more reasonable ways and that way you can dial things back. At this point she has been through so much I actually find her behavior in the last chap pretty unbelievable. But it is not gonna work like this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2015
    Like it. He gets to fuck Lara Croft... just like he wanted her. Time to kill Gordo.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2015
    Nope. No goading. Just a pity.

    A year without an update doesn't bode well for continuation nor would I expect it to continue after such a lapse.

    Interests change. As I said, 31 chapters is impressive. It just creates an impression that a broader plan existed.

    It's disappointing as a reader who enjoyed the beginning but it's too slow to follow.

    And at under five chapters per year and a one year lull, expectations should be low.

    But feel free to taunt me about it for saying so.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2015
    Hmmm...
    The old 'Pity. Such dreams left in the dark, forgotten corridors of the dreamers sleep' approach to goading him into updating. Brilliant. Why don't you write em?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2015
    Well, 31 chapters was a good run and longer than most complete stories.
    But there were a lot of 'ideas' that still haven't happened or even been set up.
    And those 31 chapters we did get took SEVEN YEARS.
    I usually consider a story abandoned after six months.
    This is going on a year with no update.
    Even IF another chapter or two comes there seems to be no hope of all the scenarios promised.
    (Well, not 'promised' but 'described' I suppose.)
    Pity.
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  • From ANON - BOO YEAHSSSS on April 07, 2014
    Faptaculiciousness! And not one ounce of slobber on her - VERY Well described - deliciousness by fat fuck!
    TAKE THAT ALL YOU NAY SAYING FUCK NUTS!
    NOW, Morbo, my prince, you must PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!! KEEP GOING LIKE 'THIS!'
    Just,from here on out, let Gordo shout out "Hello Kitty!" and leave her Croftliciousness to all new groups of debasing degenerate daisey pushers in training.
    YOU CAN DO IT!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2014
    Wait a minute. Who wrote this last chapter? I have been using this story as literary AMBIEN for months now: the same overdone use of the creativity lulling scene dragging titullar character, and tired time waisting droning on of the o-meter... YAWN!!!! Now? THIS, a story that is entertaining, sexy, believible! See you next month when you'll, no doubt, get bak to refilling my sleep aid prescription - or will you? Good luck.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2014
    MUCH BETTER. No problem with w/ subplots, just move the story forward before you do any more - well done.
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  • From VFSNAKE on March 20, 2014
    Awesome! Lara is getting punished for her past deeds. LOL!
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  • From ANON - opin on March 20, 2014
    The Pleasure mobile 2.0 was brilliant, especially the AI of her mother. The Bdsm scene and humil was well written and the cliffhanger was enticing.
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  • From ANON - BOO YEAH! on January 24, 2014
    Yo 're-title'! Get back on your meds. What part of the contents of this piece did you miss? Do you need a dictionary of porn terms? YES I WILL CALL WHINING BITCHES OUT IN REVIEWS! Like I said before... I, "THE ENORMOUS PRICK", LOVES THIS FIC!
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