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Reviews for Tomb Raider: The Fat Man Chronicles

By : MorbidFantasy
  • From ANON - re-title on January 23, 2014
    Just call this 'Tomb Raider: The Lara Croft Fuck Doll Chronicles'? Let's be honest, that is what you've written. Where is she in this story? Just does what they say... not a lot of thought went into this beyond style did it? Not much beyond fat fuck needing to be in every scene because you can't write dialogue between her and anyone else, and he is you. Right? Also, get on with the main story so we can get it over before you turn eighty.
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  • From ANON - BOOO YEAH! on January 09, 2014
    WOW! Whats with all the flames? Someone havin' a barbecue roastin' this FAT BASTARD Gordo? Look you put a shit load of work into this pup, and if some whinny 'shall remain 'anon' fuck nuts want to bitch because they didn't get what they wanted... fuck em. There is only one person whose interests matter... see where this is goin?... MINE (an enormous prick) ;) I Love it. I don't get a stiffy visualizing Gordo and her AT ALL. But I admire the fuck out of the art, the writing, and THAT aspect of it kicks much ass. I see a few plot points abandoned (the Russian dude not being w/ her on assignment THAT SUCKS I got a stiffer from that visual in a monsterous way both times... not so much the second - but still better than anything w/ 'G'man) and I don't like the whole ometer thing - I think it would be better, ie more humiliating for her to keep having natural orgasms, w/ these disgusting fucks, do to her humiliating conditioning. Sort of like "We know you ain't fakin' it bitch, and that ain't no tech toy in yer snatch/ass... that is 100% pure rapist. HA!". I was disgusted by the gang rape... as I feel I should be, and confused as to what point it served when she was already bent over for em. Iwas literaly at the point of vomiting at it's pointless excess, but was still impressed by the prose (if that is the proper word). Also... 10" 'spiked dildo?'... hammered? And he and the tech geek weren't kidnapped,(by her or hirelings) gagged, tortured, drugged into giving the password, then kept alive till it was confirmed, then fed their testicals? Then we wouldn't have this opus :) One last thing... DITCH THE FAT FUCK... he's boring, predictable, and keeps me 'humble' if you know what I mean. THAT SAID... AWSOME read.
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  • From ANON - concerned on January 08, 2014
    put down the hand cream and pick up the adderall.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2014
    Soooo now we're going back to her being a spineless sex toy of Godo? AND fucked by everybody? so much for plot
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2014
    awsome. See you next year. when the next update comes out
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2014
    Cool, since he isn't privy to the contract... this is rape. She can kill him for it... right? THAT might make sence
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  • From ANON - don't give shit about consistency on January 06, 2014
    Just have her debase herself man! Everyones a fucking critic:)
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  • From ANON - clearly not bright enough on January 06, 2014
    Thought you said in the forum that "...I'll be restricting the guys who have sex with Lara to just the bosses and their stewards..."? RIGHT.
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  • From ANON - guest on January 06, 2014
    so now Hanson has blackmail/for sex? or does she kill him to?
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  • From VFSNAKE on January 06, 2014
    Nice! Lara has no idea she is going to be taken in her sleep. HA!
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  • From ANON - IskanderX on September 27, 2013
    First of all, thanks for a great story. :)

    I can't say that I liked all parts of it (some scenes were just too sadistic for my taste) but the writing style, pace and imaginative use of the domination/submission theme were just incredible! Definitely pushed my buttons. Don't care much for physical torture and all that, but the psychological aspect of slow but steady, step-by-step breaking of Lara's will and her enslavement along with all the humiliating "assignments" were all beautifully done. I especially liked how the bad guys use Lara's arousal (via aphrodisiacs etc) as an instrument of control and further subjugation. It's always hotter when the victim is forced to enjoy all those degrading things against her conscious will. In your story it's used with such creativity that it's almost like a sexual brainwashing - when a person is gradually conditioned to associate pleasure with humiliation and submission. Orgasm control and denial was also a very nice touch. Hope it will be used more often in future chapters. :)

    On a side note: I got the impression that a change of direction during ch.14-15 (introduction of Everest and all that sub-plot about a conspiracy of evil masterminds bent on revenge against Lara) was not planned from the start. It seems like poor old Gordo is now kept around just for the name's sake (the story is called Fat Man Chronicles so he still has to be in it no matter what, right? :) ). I'm not complaining though - the new Big Bad is even better than a titular fat bastard. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2013
    when I think of Gordo, two words come to mind: gold chain. Now I mean BIG, thick, gold chain. How about Lara discovers such a piece of jewelry that he can't resist wearing; BUT it causes him to feal Lara's nausia as he fucks her? And yet can not bring himself to take it off, and won't let himself stop fucking her? He can't put it together why it's happening. What say you?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2013
    inspite of the heinous shit shes being put through - Gordo should have a live, cloriformed, New York tenement rat shoved face first halfway up his colon, and have it shocked awake with a low wattage cattle prod - if she comes out a head, imagine being the first guy she fucks of her own free will... if you can walk, don't forget the stupid smile on your face.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2013
    i'm sorry the last guys right, the idea is preposterous .
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2013
    I have a small issue to point out. the whole premise is that a man video tapped himself raping a woman hadcuffed to a table at gunpoint... that is what she's afraid of getting out to the point shes willing to voluntarily go through any of it? how many rapists publicly flaunt the fact? How many courts make it public? I get it... fantasy. STILL all she has to do is kill fat fuck... even at this stage, then Everest will be the only one left holding her card... then - take his dick off if he doesn't free her - then kill him to. The end
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