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Reviews for Roll the Bones

By : Ringshadow
  • From ANON - James Daron on May 21, 2009
    Hi again. :D I'm glad to see that you updated, but this isn't quite what I expected to be honest. I really like the fight sequence, and I really like how you portrayed Fox as fast and agile, but what I'm a little shocked about is Wolf. I'm sure he can take quite a beating, but I doubt that he would physically be able to remain conscious after taking even a grazing blow to the temple.

    I'm not to sure about the circumstances in which Fox and Wolf engaged in activities, but I would like to think that their approach to sex would be a lot more careful. I can understand Wolf giving him a blowjob, but what I don't understand and doubt would happen is Fox literally commanding *cough* begging *cough* Wolf to screw him senseless.

    I just don't see Fox submitting that easily to Wolf after all of the pent up anger and emotions that he had been holding up inside.

    Also, I'm a big fan of how you portray Fox and Katt in this series becuase no one really does a good job except you. I love Fox and Katt as a couple...and how will this affect their relationship? I hope it doesn't what they have, because its pretty good, and I'd hate to see the one good portrayal of how a Fox x Katt relationship should work out disappear.

    I do like how this chapter was longer than the last one, so thats always a plus.

    I love the chapter, but some of it didn't agree with me. But hey, sometimes you can't always get what you want, right?

    I look forward to your next chapter and more Fox x Katt.

    ~James Daron
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  • From DarKxKunoichi on April 20, 2009
    very sexy, i love it. i hope you update again!
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  • From ANON - Bro on March 19, 2009
    Wow. Been waiting for an update and was excited to see one. This was great, i love your writing it is the best. I can't wait to read what you write next.
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  • From ANON - tsurupettan on March 07, 2009
    Amazing. Just amazing. You have such a way with words and descriptions. I love how you characterize both Fox and Wolf -- actually, I love how you characterize everyone. They all just seem so believable and that just makes reading your stories all that much more enjoyable and great. I really, really love your Fox. Something about him, I don't know. I adored at how the end he kept going "are you asking me to leave?" and being confused about how to feel. I literally just wanted to hug him for that. I like how he's been having to explore and gradually accept how/what he's feeling for Wolf and what they've done.

    I'm interested in what's going to happen next, especially in their dynamics together since Wolf has mentioned he views Fox as his lover now (and I'm sure Fox feels pretty strongly for him, too, though probably not as quick to define what Wolf is to him, especially since he is still with Katt). I'm also very interested if/when James makes another appearance... I have a feeling I'll probably end up feeling really sad for Fox when he learns about all that kinda stuff. :(

    And just a small random thought. I'm going to pity the idiot who tries to mess with Fox from now on, more so speaking on behalf of males and in the sexual sense, especially if the contact's forceful/unwanted by Fox. Considering how Wolf has presented himself in the story and how possessive he [probably] is... it just would not make a nice scene at all if he saw it or the information got relayed back to him. I could see some berserker quality stuff happening.

    Anyway, I'm gonna end my review here before I keep going on. Just know that I thought the story was amazing -- in writing, characters, story. Everything, basically. And I can't wait to see what happens next and how things develop/continue to develop. :) *hugs Fox*
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