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Reviews for Unwaking moments

By : modeac
  • From That_One_Pervert on October 31, 2013
    What a story. Nice and graphic, with plenty of description in all the right places.

    One of the aspects I particularly enjoyed about this story was the build up of Lara Croft's character. Not just her physical appearance, but her very established background. As both a woman and an adventurer, she's the kind of person who those two mercenaries did not have a leg to stand on. And yet, this is what happened to her, filmed no less. Something about that type of situation always makes the story much more enjoyable.

    Now, onto how you described Lara physically. Wow. It was, dare I say, perfect. For her physical description, I honestly don't know how to compliment it any better than how you described it. But, I will say that I was quite intrigued by the sensations the mercenaries were experiencing, which I thought was brilliant. For vaginal penetration, you made her seem like the perfect lay. For anal penetration, you made her muscle tone seem perfect, so perfect that it cause those who gave her anal physical pain. Brilliant, and true to her character I believe. You truly held Lara to her status as a video game sex symbol.

    I think my only two complaints are this: 1.) Lara showing some signs of reaction despite being drugged. I don't know why, but this was a real turn off for me. I believe that the lack of a reaction from a drugged woman while she is being taken advantage of lets the reader know more how forbidden this act is supposed to be, and thus add to the taboo of the story, strengthening its appeal. However, I do believe that this may be more of a personal pet peeve, so I'll probably list this complaint more of a "It isn't you, it's me" type of complaint.

    2.) The lack of an update. Normally, I'm a very patient reader, and I will faithfully wait for an update and support the authors decision to withhold a chapter for whatever reason they deal out. But, come on. This story was posted in 2009, and it's almost 2014. I know a lack of inspiration can be a problem, but for this long? That suggests more of a lack of interest than a lack of inspiration. Now, don't get me wrong. You're under no obligation to update this story, and I won't pressure you to do so. After all, I don't know your mindset for not updating this story. Still, I believe that you should let the readers of this story know that you have no further interest in this story, so that they're hopes aren't held up under the belief that you will eventually update this story.

    Well, that's about it. The story is still great, and is easily my favorite Tomb Raider FanFic out there. It's also the story that first introduced me to your work, so I am extra appreciative of it.

    Final Rating: 8.5/10
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  • From ANON - scar'd on June 29, 2009
    Original, and well written! Bravo!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on June 19, 2009
    Awesome! I want to see more like this!
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  • From JackRetsevrah on April 08, 2009
    Very good work. Nice and descriptive. It leaves one wanting more- I'm curious about the policewoman, and who they're going to deliver Lara to, and how she ended up in this mess in the first place. I can't think of any criticisms, except for maybe the odd typo.
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  • From ANON - opin on April 06, 2009
    Sick and twisted... in a good way!
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