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Reviews for Finding Lost Dreams

By : Lanie12777
  • From ANON - Sexykid on August 28, 2014
    Hey can i be in the next story?
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  • From Jenmoon1 on April 26, 2013
    wow what a story thanks for writeing it
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  • From WolfenVic on July 30, 2011
    I enjoyed the story but there were some issues. First off your spin up time was just a little too long, the anticipation of waiting to get to the bulk of the story was taking a long time. Then there were the subplots that went missing or were left unresolved till the end of the story. Personally I really wanted to find out more about how Max's work life was going since you had started making sure to point it out, or even looking at Roxas, Axel, and that family... they feel... flat. Like they were added just for that fangirl scream of " oh my god it's the Kingdom Hearts 2 Cast all together!" Roxas and Axel just felt to have such minor roles compared to what they could of been. Then there was Zexion's coming out. Something hinted at early in the story but not even revealed till the epilogue. I really wanted this to happen early to maybe press Riku in the right way toward Sora but all Zexion's purpose seems to be was to yell at Riku in one statement and be the person to watch Sora leave alone. A missed opportunity there for a deeper "brothers" sub plot. One last thing that felt.... underused was Riku's, uncle I believe, being the science teacher. He could of played an integral role in watching over Sora or some other part during the story but he seems to have been forgotten.

    On the flip side I did enjoy how you integrated the town into the real world and transfered the game to reality. It lost some of the anime quality but it made up for it in it's reality. The focus on STDs was.. okay. It wasn't detracting from the story but it wasn't adding. Even though it could of been better I did enjoy Riku's change from being unsure to loving Sora and eventually Marrying him. Also enjoyed seeing Kairi with someone instead of ending up alone.

    Over all I thought this was a good story but the glaring missed opportunities and slow start up really hurts this for me. If I had to rate this I'd give it a three out of five for being above average but just below excellent or even just great.

    I wish you good luck in future endeavors.
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  • From WolfenVic on July 29, 2011
    I have to comment because I was a kid who was always in the closet but got picked on anyway... I tired my best my sophomore and senior year to push back but... a few certain bullies never got the message. I probably would of punched him or kneed him if it wasn't for the fact that would of got me kicked out of school...

    Sadly I'm a bit like younger Hermione. I'm studious and find expulsion, detention, and out of school suspension worse than death.

    Now other than that I have nothing to say, I'll review when I finish or stop reading.
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  • From on July 05, 2011
    I wish you had made it a bit longer to cover the wedding and honeymoon but I love what you did with the story. LEt me know if you write anythign else. I will gladly read it
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  • From tobiasrosetta on June 27, 2011
    Hello darling. Just wanted to pop by and review for you. I love this story. You're an amazing writer and your flow is impeccable. Your content and descriptive verse are really incredibly refreshing. You and your co-writer are definitely on my favorites list now. I look forward to reading more from you.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on June 02, 2011
    I finally read all the way up to chappie 21. It's amazing that I past this story up so many times before not really thinking much of it. I'm glad I decided to give it a chance read :)! Can't wait for the next chappie!!
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  • From Luciusinuson on April 15, 2011
    more please!!!!!!
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  • From on March 21, 2011
    oooh such a good story I can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - pokezejello on March 04, 2011
    This chapter almost made me have a heart attack >=/ It was written so well, the details made me feel like I was there!!!:O I wanna know what happens so bad I'm prolly gonna be thinking about it at work all day X] Can't wait to read the next chapter so keep up the excellent quality of work!
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  • From yaoihentai69 on February 28, 2011
    I just found your story, and I find the concept interesting. I started reading it, and it seems even more interesting. However, it's a tad hard to read when everything in underlined and/or bold.
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  • From AngelicPhantom on January 09, 2011
    Nooooo thats one thing I hate...
    Finding an amazing fic and then having to be patient for the next chapter lol.
    I'm not a very patient person :P Especially when left on a cliff-hanger like that!

    Cannot wait for the next chapter... Is there an option for update alerts on this site?
    There's a couple more chapters of Endless Screams too if you're interested :)
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  • From AngelicPhantom on January 09, 2011
    Personally I think the expedited test results helped the story flow better.
    Damn I love the way you write...
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  • From AngelicPhantom on January 09, 2011
    Wow you write really extremely well.
    I was actually dreading Max's talk along with Sora...
    All-consuming little world you got going on here... And I am going to be so gutted when I reach the end :)

    THanks so much for reviewing me too... My one KH fanfic holds a special place in my heart and I'm glad you liked it.
    Oh yeah, and the same to you, I love the complete absence of grammatical errors.
    Seriously I got to the point of ignoring any fic with a certain prevalence of stupid errors.
    So yeah its great to find someone who also values the English language lol
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  • From AngelicPhantom on January 09, 2011
    Damn I love this story.
    Lol I thrive on angst-fiction.
    It's addictive too... I can't seem to stop reading it ay.
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