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Reviews for Finding Lost Dreams

By : Lanie12777
  • From lemonykisses on August 16, 2009
    My God I want to pound the ever-loving shit out of Xemnas, but I'm sure every Sora supporter/fangirl wants to right now also. I would enjoy plucking every strand of hair off his head; one at a time. Good story, GOOD story. I had to say it twice it's so good. The angst is so overwhelming and I am frustrated to no end that I can't help Sora also. I hope Riku can get through to Sora. He messed up to the infinite power but now that's he trying to redeem himself, I think his father needs to have a "talk" with Xemnas... "OMNI-SLASH!!" (with a little "Kamehameha" on the side, courtesy of Goku)

    On a different note; Sephi as Riku's father: GENIUS!! Sephi being with Cloud: SUPER-GENIUS!! I went XD *glee* reading the parts b/t Sephiroth and Cloud. And one more thing: Is Tidus THE Tidus from FFX? If so, where's Wakka and Lulu? I've liked those two :)
    Quick conversation b/t me and my b/f: "I don't think Wakka had any say in the matter when Lulu said she liked him and she was going to have babies from him."
    B/f: XD *cracks up*

    On behalf of other fangirls, I hope this hiatus is worth it and to get out of your funk as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - Ireyon on August 16, 2009
    I enjoyed reading this chapter, really. You have a nice style and both your grammar and plot are way better than most other things I came across. The only thing I noticed is that while you described the characters with great deatail, you mostly neglect to picture how the surroundings look like. It's not a big thing really, but it would add a bit more variety to the story if you would insert a few tidbits of describtion here and there, like you did with the kitchen in chapter one.

    Otherwise keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - jennifer on August 13, 2009
    thank you so much for updating! i jumped and literally gasped when i saw this update. it made me very happy.
    im sorry about your writers block, and hope things work out. while im dissapointed hearing about your hiatus, i hope things IRL for yougo well. have fun in your hiatus and ill be here when you come back :)
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  • From ANON - jennifer on July 14, 2009
    im so glad you updated!
    this last chapter was a bit dissapointing. i guess i was expecting more of a development of the story, so i am in great anticipation of your next update.
    this, of course, is still one of my favorite fanfictions :)
    i love your writing style; how its so very easy to read, but not too simple. i love it and will defiently be on a lookout for the next update.
    thank you for writing!
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on July 12, 2009
    My first time reading a Kingdom Hearts fanfic. Not too bad. I'm anxious for more. :D
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  • From ANON - akaku on June 16, 2009
    poor sora! True i'd want to know if i got something from an incident like that. Curse Xemnes to the hell ole he crawled out from! And its about damned time that Riku stood up for his long time best friend! Even in the videogames he was selfish!!! oops... it looks like i went off into a rant again.. ^^" hehe sry. Well rly good work! Cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - M.D Sora on June 14, 2009
    You know, I was going to just blow this fiction off as being another Angsty over emotional drag. But I'm happy to say that this is not anything like that. I really love the detail given to explaining the back story to Sora's parents and everything, and the writing is exquisite. Its all very realistic, which is refreshing. Also you I noticed you didn't make Sora excessively flamboyant, which is awesome! Great job ^-^
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  • From ANON - Ireyon on June 06, 2009
    I hate Xemnas. I he's f***ing disgusting, I wonder why Sora's father can't feel the creepiness coming of this guy in waves. I just hope that you won't write something like this again, please?
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  • From England1 on June 06, 2009
    great!!! love your fic.... please continue to create more wonderful fiction such as Soriku fics..
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  • From reamane21 on June 06, 2009
    Awwwwwww! Poor Sora will he be at school tomorrow and will Riku make up with sora when he id giving the chance to do so continue please i need to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - melly on June 01, 2009
    I really like the Sephiroth/Cloud part, it's super duper. =) (i'm in love with that pairing) But I adore the Sora/Riku parts, i hope Riku stops bieng a meanie!
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  • From ANON - Ireyon on May 27, 2009
    You've got a rather intersting story here, I especiaaly like that the reaction of most of Sora's schoolmates is pretty realistic compared to other things I've read. Please update soon.
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  • From HoLvHoT on May 27, 2009
    what will happen i need to know what will happen with Riku
    please i beg, more
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