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Reviews for Lifeless

By : disscordia
  • From Shadowknight12 on September 26, 2010
    This was an excellent story. It's actually the only Changeling: The Lost story I've found so far. You manage to capture the madness, the loss, the envy, the sheer beauty of the game, each and every theme the books touch upon. I love it how you can figure out the guy's a fetch from the moment he starts talking about his life. It's a little treat for those in the know, and a good lure for those who aren't. The changeling himself and his relationship with his fetch is definitely one of the best ones. Most of the time, you see changelings going all "Oh, I'll just kill him" and that's that. Nobody mentions the narcissism aspects or the desire to harm the fetch (and vice versa!). And holy shit, the kiss was a completely awesome way of breaking the reader's expectations in a million pieces (and in the best way!).

    One minor complain: It was too short! I was left craving for more! After reading Shadows in the Keep and the way you took your time to set the scene and dedicate a fair bit of time describing the sex itself (which, even as it is now, is ridiculously hot), this one was a bit disappointing. Now, I'm not going to say "you HAVE to write more!" because I dislike that kind of thing. Instead I'll say that if you do write more, I'll definitely be back to read it.
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