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Reviews for Steamy Memory

By : tormentingthunder
  • From salarta on September 13, 2011
    I feel terrible for not reading and reviewing this fic much sooner. I got caught up in a lot of other things, and I didn't want to read and review until I can seriously devote time to undivided attention here.

    I love the whole thing! Odessa doesn't get much attention, and me saying this is an excellent fic that I loved is rare for fics that are primarily romantic rather than the kind I write. There's only one criticism I can make: you use the term 'entrance' too often as a replacement term for vagina. It's good to not always explicitly use terms like vagina, because they can seem far too clinical or common, but repeating the same word detracts from the read.

    Everything else is excellently presented, excellently phrased. Keep up the good work, and if you want to write more fics in the future with Odessa, I hope you do so. :)
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