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Reviews for Deus Ex Human Revolution: Trust is Hard

By : furbert
  • From ANON - UltraViolet on June 12, 2013
    Hello! Sorry for the late review! Life keeps getting in my way and the fact that I have mid-term exams doesn't help at all :( anyways, not the point, right?
    I love this one; really!! This was one of the things I was anticipating!! Finally the sexual tension between Adam and Li has been resolved! I truly enjoyed every bit of the smut, and I'm so happy about this because Adam needed some love. He really did-- not to mention that I've been looking for this for a very long time-- so thanks for writing this :3
    Sorry I can't leave you more meaningful words ; A ; my mind was blown and my brain is on a high right now. It's just that the way you portray Adam is downright accurate! To show his insecurities and show him like a man who also has feelings, and have Li help him overcome them was just sweet :3 I can imagine it's not easy for him to look at his reflection in the mirror everyday, but things might change now that she's around.
    It's simply wonderful :B
    Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - UltraViolet on June 05, 2013
    I can't believe my eyes!!! AN UPDATE??? :D wow!! You sure write fast-- I wish I could write like that! Not only that but I love your writing style. It has this little something that is moving, and stirring and makes me want to keep reading until the end :)
    And, yes!! You are mean-- scratch that, you are an EVIL woman! Leaving a cliffhanger like that! ; A ; why??? I was enjoying the chapter. In all honesty, I have been waiting for this ever since the second chapter TT__TT because I love the sexual tension between them, and I truly like Li, and plus I am a pervert.
    Besides, the way their relationship has developed-- even in such a relative short period of time-- is sweet, gentle and full of small gestures that leave all giggling and fangirling over Adam. Let's be honest, he is a wonderful guy despite some major flaws, and I think that he deserves someone who cares for him-- unlike that Megan witch. I am sorry, I don't mean to bash on characters and I don't naturally do that but she was such a hateful woman, doing what she did to Adam, betraying him after he almost lost his life to find and save her! Ugh. I think she's the only character who served as a love interest that I despised.
    Back to the topic! I like Li because she truly cares about him. I mean, she's the kind of kind-hearted girl that is naive-- don't feel offended, please ; A ;-- in some aspects of life but still has the enough experience to analyze reality and draw her own conclusions. When I say a little naive, I mean that she is a bit inexperienced in matters of love xD

    Of course, I don't think they love each other-- at least, not yet-- there's just a lot of chemistry and attraction here that is developing into a stormy affair and I would love to see how this turns out in the end. Whatever you decide to do, I will go along with it :)
    Cannot wait for the next chapter. Hope you post very soon!
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  • From ANON - UltraViolet on June 04, 2013
    My God!!!! Another update??? you spoil me too much! ; A ; but I appreciate it. You don't know how happy this makes me; seeing that this wonderful story has been updated :D that's because I'm always looking forward to read more from you! It's such a good thing that you regularly post chapters, so I can keep up with the story.
    Anyways, the situation of her country was set in a fantastic way. Explaining the political and social background of this futuristic UK gives us more insight on her reasons to want to flee from this place that has become a machine terror. I know I would want to get the hell out of there! As far as I can see, it's a very good reason to do so. We also know that Adam feels sort of guilty since she helped him and all and he wants to get her to safe haven, otherwise she will be killed-- makes me wonder why those SpecOps were after her; is there something you're not telling us?
    I hope everything goes smooth from Canada to the USA. We wouldn't want Li to be deported to the UK! ; A ; that would be the end for her! They need luck on their side now more than ever. And even if they make it to the States, it still would be dangerous for her. She could be deported at any time if she is discovered. Augh, everything is so difficult right now! :(
    On another topic, I truly enjoyed their small interaction in the bathroom *wiggles eyebrows* it was a smart move on your part, to set up a situation in where there is this evident sexual tension that Adam and Li try to hold back. I just can imagine the look of frighten on her face as Adam watched-- more like oogled-- her naked body ¤____¤ gosh, for a moment I thought they were going to-- ah, you're such a tease!! But I loved it x3 now I AM really looking forward to more! It's just those little details the ones that I enjoy the most :) hopefully you will update soon!
    Please, keep writing!
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  • From ANON - UltraViolet on May 29, 2013
    Oh my God! Thanks for the update! :D it made me so happy to see that there was a new chapter for this! You know, it's nice to know that you're still working on this fic ; 3 ; even more, we know that Adam needs more love!
    Anyways, lovely chapter. Even though it was on the short side, I enjoyed it very much. Especially the bantering between Adam and Pritchard xD that just made me crack. I can only imagine Adam's frustration and annoyance at Francis. The guy has never been easy, we know. A perfect characterization of both characters, I believe. And Li, well-- I like the girl! :D again, I've always been wary of OCs since they usually end up being Mary Sues, but so far yours has not shown any signs of becoming one, and I appreciate that. I am interested in reading more as I want to know just what these two will come across in their journey. And of course, I wouldn't mind reading some hot stuff along the way ;D I know this is premature! ; A ; they've just met! So you are the one who decides when they will be ready for that. God, I'm such a perv TAT
    Please, update soon!
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  • From ANON - UltraViolet on May 13, 2013
    Hey there! Honestly, I have to say that this is a really interesting story! From the very first chapter, I knew that this would be something special and, gosh, I was right! I truly love your writing style and the way you're able to engross the reader's mind. Nicely done.
    I have to admit that I'm wary of OCs, but Li is a wonderfully fleshed out character and I love the idea of her and Adam being together. I just hope that we're able to read more of them. I felt disappointed that there weren't more chapters to read :( hope you update sometime.
    Good luck and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Brittany on October 23, 2011
    OMG, I've been dying for someone to write a fanfic about Deus Ex Human Rev. I'm working on one myself...very slowly, as I'm a perfectionist, but its in the works. I hope you update soon. :)
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