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Reviews for Corinthian Knot

By : JayDee
  • From Thundercloud on January 14, 2019

    This was a great read. The setup of the story made think on the actual begining of the first Tomb Raider game with wolves that are killed by Lara (actually I try to forget the visuals of that scene, it has been a long time since the game came). Lara might certainly have some bad karma when we are talking about wolves.

    Anyway the detail I especially like about your story was how you used Lara's pony tale to explain how the domination took place. Hot and very sexy. Keep the good work.


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  • From InBrightestDay on January 04, 2019

    While I will continue working my way through the Slumber Party-verse, I noticed you'd written a lot of videogame stories.  I saw that this didn't have the MCD tag, so...

    Okay, on the one hand, Lara was just fucked by a dog, and she's a sex slave.

    On the other hand, she's alive, which is never a given in Tomb Raider fics (for whatever reason) and she seems happy with her situation, which is also not a given in Tomb Raider fics.  One needs to appreciate these things when they happen.

    Something I'd like to point out is that you managed to sidestep a lot of the inherent squickiness of bestiality by making Corinth sentient.  I still found it a little gross every once in a while (sentient or not, it's still a dog), but a lot of it was surprisingly hot.

    Finally, I think I may have spotted a typo.

    "Please, don't... it feels so good in me?"

    Granted, perhaps Lara's supposed to be confused, but I felt like maybe that was supposed to be a period.


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  • From roybarnes on May 07, 2013
    Well done! Lara's puppies will probably mate with her as well I imagine.
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  • From JustS on November 18, 2012
    Awesome stuff.
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  • From TentacleFan on March 17, 2012
    I loved this work. Very hot and well written. I felt the description was very well done. The scenario and the outcome of Lara submitting to her new lifestyle was a delight.
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  • From DrChristmas on November 28, 2011
    I LOVED it.

    You ought to continue this one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2011
    Omg, I love dogs but perhaps not as much as Lara lol!

    Again, you are so good at telling so much in such short stories, I was actually surprised (but far from disappointed) to see Lara having a more comfortable time and a happy ending of sorts too (collars ooh!) - no over-hung Centaurs or evil Sheep-God statues! Loved it ^_^.
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  • From porneater on November 13, 2011
    Awesome! another Tomb Raider fic by JD!!

    I'm not usually a fan of dog-sex, since it seems a little degrading to the women involved. But you managed to make it kind of classy here – giving Corinth mystical powers and more intelligence than the average hound gave the whole scenario a kind of mythical quality which steered it away from the usual low-class bestiality porn that you often get with dog-on-woman material like this.

    Great to read!

    Lara's really working her way through the animal kingdom isn't she, lol!

    Next up... dolphin gangbang!!
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  • From bloodravyn on November 09, 2011
    loved it!
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  • From Cheesekeeper on November 07, 2011
    I enjoyed reading the story a lot and found it matched the picture perfectly. I'm a fan of description and felt that there were places where more of it could be used, particularly during the actual but having the link to the picture did help with that.
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