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Reviews for Monster Girl Saga

By : GenocideHeart
  • From Shroom22 on July 05, 2020

     First off I must commend you for all that you’ve done so far. I stumbled across this one just looking for stories relating to monster girl quest. Immediately after finishing the first chapter I marathon every single written one so far. There are just so many things I could commend you on but I’ll just say you’ve created a magnificent world with characters, description and more.  I understand that real life can interfere in many ways with writing. But I want to tell you that despite me literally somebody across the story by accident it is the reason I created an account so I could express all that I feel about the story Rick. If you ever end up seeing this please continue writing even if it is in the story you’ve got a great talent for it. And good luck  and if you ever wanna reach out to me I think my email is attached to the profile. Sorry I rambled on enough uu


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  • From V01D on February 17, 2018

    The main question I have, somewhat dependent on when this got started, is whether the Mother is divergent from Canon. If not, I wonder why Lucifina is using a false (or even a shortened verison) name.

    If this was written PRIOR to the release of part 3, it is understandable, since the writer would not have known about Luka's Angel heritage.


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  • From UnderCoverH on July 29, 2017

    By far one of if not the best story's I have read on this site!

    I would love to read so much more that I can't stand it xD.

    If the authur would like to have much greater reader feed back I highly recommend posting this story on RoyalRoadLegend's, it is a very good site for authur's to post the work's on with many writer's group's to help with proof reading, idea sharing,etc. 

    There is also a most read list for people to see and I have no doubt when I say you will soar to the very top very quickly!!

    It is my very sincear hope that I can read more of this story very soon!!


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  • From ANON - on July 01, 2016
    Best MGQ fic out there for sure, please keep the updates if you still intend to continue. Your scenes with Alice are the best!
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  • From ANON - epitearo on April 23, 2016
    This is legitimacy not only the best Monster Girl Quest fanfic, but just the idol of fanfiction itself. This is an amazing piece of writing, whether fanfiction or not. Each chapter is worth the wait.
    Keep it up, OP.
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  • From Karharot on March 03, 2016
    Interesting story, I look forward to seeing next chapter. I hope it will come out eventualy :)
    Using the occasion - I caught two minor mistakes in chapter 13:
    1. Eventually, >>Meia>Meiaher
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  • From ANON - Super bummed bro on January 19, 2016
    I was super happy to see that this story wasn't dead, and now it appears that it's dead again
    Damn, this was the best one too
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  • From lunasmeow on January 08, 2016
    I'd nearly forgotten about this fic. Glad that it hasn't been dropped. Also interested in whatever you have going on in the background. Nice blend of following canon while adding your own twists and turns.
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  • From ANON - Hard Science on January 08, 2016
    Hurray! An update! I honesty had completely forgotten that this existed, figuring that you'd abandoned it, but the Author of Knight of the Void mentioned that you released a new chapter so I had to come see for myself.
    You really are crafting a living world her, and I can't wait to see when happens between the Mermaid General and Alice.
    Thanks for your hard work!
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  • From ANON - Good Ol' No-Name on August 14, 2015
    It has returned!
    I thought this story was dead, which would have been a shame, because it's fantastic and original.
    Can we get a warning before super-long hiatuses?
    Keep writing, I'm hyped as hell!
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  • From ANON - ARandomGuy on August 14, 2015
    W00t! A new chapter! It's been a long time coming, but I'm super happy that it's here! It was a great read, with the right blend of action, romance (wink wink, nudge nudge) and humor. I'm glad you're back, and I patiently and eagerly await the next chapter when you have a chance.
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  • From ANON - HardScience on July 07, 2015
    I just had a jolt of memory and remembered this story! So very nostalgic. And the quality is as good as I remember.
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  • From ANON - Cooldudez897 on April 19, 2015
    Is there a way to get updates on this story?
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  • From ANON - ARandomGuy on November 07, 2014
    I've reread this fanfiction over and over and over, and I still find it as amazing as the very first time that I read it! I can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm sure it will be just as good! :)
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  • From ANON - lunasmeow on July 12, 2014
    Thank you for writing such an awesome story. I have just re-started MGQ since the 3rd part is done and found this because of Familiar of the Void, Knight of the Void or whatever it was on ff.net. I never expected to find actual quality fanfiction of an eroge game, although considering how good the story of MGQ is I suppose it is an exception to the norm of the genre. Please continue this, and I can't wait to see what comes next. Your changes are great, because while they change the story dramatically, they are all a direct result of Thermidor, rather than simply changing the main character without any shown reason (a mistake many fanfic authors mistake) and seeing how those changes affect the MGQ world is a good way to give this world a fresh taste. Excellent work, I'm looking forward to this fic being completed, though it's obviously quite a ways away from that.
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