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Reviews for the cavern

By : jigsawman
  • From ninesenshi on June 14, 2012
    Well, I enjoyed the concept. Need to practice your writing.
    Just for the record
    1) Women don't have a prostate
    2) `hormones and persistence' is two things.
    3) Lots of problems with the biology here. Just call them magical raptors or the descendants of creatures genetically modified by an ancient civilization and you can have them knock her up.

    Hope for more of these themes

    SailorNemesis
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