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Reviews for Justifiable Homicide

By : DarkLaraJade
  • From ANON - Ellie McAwsum on September 09, 2012
    Hi there!

    Well, first of all, I really liked this story! ^^ It's good to see Krogan get some recognition.

    But, eeeeh, the diehard-pro-krogan beat gets tiring after a while, especially since there's no real variation. Too much of a good thing, really.

    A decent read, although I think Shepard and Wrex seem a bit too OOC; Guilt and all that might have something to do with it as an earlier reviewer said, but... yeah, it's a bit weird to see them act like that. It's like it's their names, but not their personalities, y'know? But that only applies in the extreme "let's rape people, ok?"-case, where Shepard just accepts everything, and Miranda just goes "blush blush krogan cocks, lolol". It's just too out-of-character from the people I know from the series, so it's easier to just think of them as OCs with different names. Heck, I renamed Miranda and Shepard to "Millie" and "Shelly" in my head when I re-read the story, because otherwise it wouldn't make sense to me with the characters' actual personalities xD

    It's fantasy fiction and your story, but the whole "rape is okay if their -body- likes it"-message that's seemingly being sent out isn't exactly my cup of tea. Heck, I like forceful men in bed myself and I especially like fictional men that know how to take charge, but the way you're getting them across is just... too much to me. I'm guessing lots of people might like it (and that's their choice ^^) but it's not what I'd personally prefer. But then again, this isn't my story, it's yours. I'm just saying what's on my mind here, xD

    I think I'll finish up this review here... finally i'll say that I think your story started out VERY nice, and the characters seemed natural and the story had a nice and steady beat to it, but now it's going in a direction I personally don't fancy, so I'll sincerely wish you good luck in writing it and get out of your hair ^^


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  • From ANON - Lynx on September 08, 2012
    Omg! What an evil cliffy! Update real soon please!!!
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  • From Spiritwolf71 on September 07, 2012
    The story has been great, I had never really thought of Wrex as a love interest and I did cure the genophage and never thought of the reprocussion and fall out of not doing so. Interesting take. Have to admit though, I'm with Miranda on this, Shepard is being way to docile and submissive , but I can see why with the guilt.
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  • From ANON - Miss Lynxx on August 28, 2012
    Holy hell of jupiters many moons! That is a cruel and horrid way to die! I'm really surprised Wrex didn't fuck her to death! Im surprised thatthe korgan of the ship to fuck till she was gool just to get their revenge! But I guess he needs his babies now that all the lady's are gone :( Well let me say you sure can write an intriguing story! Hope to see an update soon?

    Ps (they say make up sex is the best lolololol)
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  • From ANON - Lynxx on August 26, 2012
    Whoa!! Two chapters? What a delight! And what a surprize to see Miranda!! I honestly never saw that coming and this cure with all the females dying!!! Whoa that is crazy!! I'm very interested to see what's gonna happen next and how Shepard with react when Wrex tells her. Update date soon please!!
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  • From ANON - Miss Lynxx on July 23, 2012
    "It fit before woman, it'll fit again."
    Hahah hell that was sooo fucking funni!
    This chapter way so twisted!! Shepard preggo! Geez you sure know how to write a surprising story!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Miss Lynx on July 15, 2012
    Fucking crazy good and twisted! I hoope to see another chapter of Wrex finding Shepard. So great job!!
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