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Reviews for Ketchum's Girls

By : sheltiedg
  • From ANON - Jororo on October 01, 2014
    How about the next few chapters be between Ash and Hope,Faith,and Charity? Those three girls who are Professor Ivy's assistants. Then the next chapter after those is between Ash and all three of them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2014
    Funny storys i like them.

    Can you add Alba (ger), Aka パンジー (Pansy), aka Alexa (en). Or her sister?
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  • From ANON - Ryan on July 17, 2014
    Awesome lemons, love the variety of partners and styles. I've got a request for one of the few girls you've missed though - Clair. She can fit in the gym leader stripper series, that tight bodysuit and Dragonair are begging for a striptease.
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  • From ANON - Mr. Hey You on March 20, 2014
    Hi, some nice little scenes your got here. Like the way you portray the characters and the different situations you put them in, their either in character and I could see them behaving that way or their gloriously out of character and its fun to read.

    Would love to see a chapter or two with Hilda and/or Rosa from Black/White Black/White 2
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  • From ANON - v on January 11, 2014
    You keep using the same characters and situations over and over again and it is getting really boring. Why don't you try someone different for once?
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  • From ANON - Grimahr on January 04, 2014
    i Love your story so far. Ive read it off and on I can only read so much at once its just so good XD. If you are taking requests I was hoping you could do a chapter with Iris using her ass to hotdog ash or maybe have ash give her A rimjob? I'm more into ass content, and Iris has the best one in my opinion so I would love to see that if you can.
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  • From ANON - GuardianofDarkness95 on December 06, 2013
    Great writing as always, Anyways are you going top use any of the XY girls in you're series. If you do can write one with Serena. I have a few idea that might help if your intered.

    1; Based off XY 7, After watching Ash competing in the rhyhorn race, Serena can't help but feel turned on by Ash's performance. After the race Serena could ride Ash like a rhyhorn or something along those lines.

    2: Just use the high school setting. Something about serena having a crush on ash and somewhere in between she is being subjected to bullying and her crush comes to the rescue. End of story ash bangs her.

    Either way i hope you can write an Ash and Serena



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  • From ANON - RS on December 06, 2013
    You may want to delete one of the Iris stories, seeing how you have the same one back to back.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2013
    maybe you could do Serena or Bonnie next.
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  • From ANON - ShadowLDrago on September 14, 2013
    Lucky Ash, he's fucked practically every single woman in the pokemon series that is hot! Who hasn't he fucked female wise? Hm... I don't think he's fucked Flannery, Roxanne or any of the female elite 4 yet.
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  • From dault3883 on September 12, 2013
    please do some more flannery ash story's is it only me or does she kinda remind you of tonks from harry potter as far as her dressing style and spunky attitude go
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2013
    say, why don't you do an Ash/Georgia/Iris chapter? you know, Georgia shows up, trying to seduce Ash, but Iris will not have it
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  • From ANON - ShadowLDrago on July 17, 2013
    very interesting story, this is great. I do have a few ideas, maybe Jessie getting dominated in BDSM by Ash and Cassidy who was his informant about Team Rocket in an older chapter.
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  • From Arrowfan237 on July 16, 2013
    Another idea is Aya, Koga's younger sister
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  • From Arrowfan237 on July 16, 2013
    How about one about Rebecca, the daughter of Hitmochan's trainer in The Punchy Pokemon. She wants to "thank" Ash for all of his work in bringing her family back together

    Another idea is the girl who had the pink Butterfree. She lets Ash in on a tradition of the Butterfree mating season, the trainers must also mate.


    Just some thoughts, Love the story
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