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Reviews for Pokemon Colosseum: heat in the shadows

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From ANON - Azachiel on July 25, 2013
    You know, you write an interesting type of story. Pretty smutty, but that's more or less what people expect coming here, yet you don't completely abandon the plot either. So far this story is fairly entertaining, but you contradicted yourself in this second chapter. When Rui got cornered by the Shadow Pokémon she noted she would have tried Poképhilia sooner had she known how good it felt, yet when she told Wes her story she mentioned she got kicked out/left after a round with the family Gallade. So she should have already known, and already been into Poképhilia long before Makuhita and Croconaw.
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on July 15, 2013
    You have been gifted with the ability to take the story from pretty much anything, turn it into an xxx porno, and still have it make sense andnbe hot as fuck. Keep it up m8
    JMAHWK
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  • From ANON - Rillis on July 12, 2013
    *reads wow flexible Rui is: Nose bleed*

    Again love how you balance sex & story, rare quality in multi-chapter lemons.

    P.S.
    Damn! Wish my Girlfriend was that flexible!
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  • From ANON - JoeV1 on July 09, 2013
    The last part...

    Did someone give you any inspiration by any chance? Nudge nudge etc.

    Still well written as usual, and follows the game well enough.

    - Looking forward to whatever story/chapter you have planned next.
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on July 08, 2013
    ......i'm gonna be honest, I thought this one was just okay
    I like it, but.... its not a favorite of mine :
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  • From ANON - Aloasa on June 07, 2013
    nice story and chapter you got there, if you can make a it doesn't affect misdreavus reference then I would be happy XD
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  • From ANON - Rillis on May 22, 2013
    Great chapter, doing this game justice. BTw, I was wondering, when did u start writing these fics?
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on May 22, 2013
    Nice job, dude :) Can't wait to see more.
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on May 21, 2013
    i REALLY liked this one ;)
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on May 21, 2013
    M8, you don't know how perfect this was, or how honored I feel to have this chapter dedicated to me (at least in part)
    If you keep writing like this, I really dont care how long it takes you to update.
    JMAHWK
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on May 05, 2013
    Hope Duking is going to be nice.
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on May 05, 2013
    man, I would hate too see what would happen when Wes is jealous.
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on May 01, 2013
    M8, im serious when I say this. You are a god. I honestly and fully believe you are a god of lemons. This chapter was so close to perfect it made the wait not only worth it, but I would have happily waited six months for this. (But that not to say wait six months before posting again. The sooner the better)
    JMAHWK
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on May 01, 2013
    Dude, you managed to take my suggestion for Pyrite town and made it better than I could have ever hoped for. I honestly can not wait to see what you do next.
    JMAHWK
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  • From ANON - Rillis on April 30, 2013
    Y do Fanfic writers make the plot better than the games?
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