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Reviews for Pokemon Gag Factor

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From ANON - Ynk on April 08, 2016
    The only way to deal with a bothering cop
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  • From ANON - Ynk on April 08, 2016
    How about a writing like "Gym badge for any big cock with a big load"? XD
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  • From ANON - Ynk on April 08, 2016
    First slut is down! Or more up... Fucked up ;) Keep going with this one! Want mooore!!
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  • From ANON - Sakura on September 10, 2015
    I'm going to review each chapter individually, in chunks of 5 at a time. I hope no one minds!

    Chapter 1: Iris is such a lucky little slut, haha. I'd kill to have her job, especially since she gets to find men like Barry on the beach. She should know better than to wake up a man while he's sleeping! She's lucky he only decided to rape her face a little. This whole situation could have been avoided if she had just sucked him off like a good little whore instead of trying to get him to move.

    Chapter 2: Now Misty is such an eager little cunt, I love it... one whiff of the stalker's sweaty balls and she's willing to do whatever he wants her to do. Her only mistake is trying to finger herself, but luckily the stalker catches her. Always remember: your pleasure doesn't matter - only his does!

    Chapter 3: It must be tough being Officer Jenny. You have to try and keep law and order, while hiding the fact that you're a cock-addicted slut... The fact that Brodie tells her to fuck off multiple times should have been warning enough for her. You can't control a man who doesn't respect you at all! Luckily, she starts to understand her place when he begins to roughly facefuck her. Using her own handcuff against her makes the scene all the better! She'll think twice before trying to arrest someone now. ;)

    Chapter 4: Flannery... poor girl. Getting gangbanged by a bunch of men can't be easy. Too much cum, too many cocks. I guess that's what you get when you "accidentally" enter the male sauna!

    Chapter 5: Now this one, I love. Bianca is such a needy little slut, and Michael starts out so innocently... But she and the rest of the women on the beach really help to bring out with wild, dominant side. When he pins her face into the sand and just starts to really roughly fuck her throat... God, it's the best. I want to live in a world where any big dicked guy can just walk up and roughly fuck your face and get cheered on by the crowd of people around him.

    Well those are my chapter-by-chapter reviews for now. I'll be back soon for the next five!
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  • From ANON - Eighteen on September 09, 2015
    This has quickly become one of my favorite stories on this site. I'm not ashamed to admit that the rough treatment shown to the ladies in this story really gets me going. >
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  • From ANON - dickbutt on June 19, 2015
    Would love to see more of Dawn and Iris choking on that cock, otherwise great :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2015
    You should do a chapter with Delia Ketchum.
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  • From ANON - Selias on February 24, 2015
    You don't have any periods in your story, other than the ellipses (...), and the ellipses has one too many.
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  • From AvianHero on February 18, 2015
    Hmm, not bad, not bad at all.

    There are a thing or two that I wished was different, but you gave me what I wanted and I am glad. Though I think you might have forgotten to credit me for the OC. I hope you continue to use Felix in the future.
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  • From The-OC-Slutifyer on January 13, 2015
    Damn Flannery got the 'Stuffing' knocked out of her lol. Loved the previous chapters as well. Anyway onto the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Want ORAS Girls on December 16, 2014
    Any plans to do a chapter for this with Lisia or Zinnia from Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire? Lisia in particular, she's always meeting your character in the dressing room after shows and promises them something special if they can win the Master-rank contests...
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  • From ANON - TheSinful on November 26, 2014
    I'd really love to see a Delilah (or however you spell Ash's mom's name [or any of the pokemilfs for that matter]) and/or Jessie chapter myself.
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  • From ANON - Atlas on November 21, 2014
    Whoo! Dawn is like the perfect for Brodie, soft ass that's shapely and a tight cunt what more to ask for? I loved the ending of it
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  • From ANON - NyteBlayde on November 10, 2014
    Nice m8 very nice.

    Thanks for using my other oc. Can't wait till the next one.

    Best regards
    -NyteBlayde
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  • From ANON - aaronze on October 26, 2014
    OC Jaycee:
    Great story, kept me hooked and wanting more. Fits in great with the ongoing theme of the series. The attention to details like using Arceus as God, and comparing sizes to native objects is amazing.

    I'd really love to see these stories continued with other sexual acts included. I disagree with the grammer nazis, the structure of your work is fine. The lack of grammer didn't subtract from the story or make it unreadable, but you might benefit from having a beta that can do that stuff for you :)

    Awesome stuff! I can't wait for the more!
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