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Reviews for Pokemon Lust Green version

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  • From The_Desert_Dancer on January 17, 2017

    Didn't like Blue; not afraid to admit it. Nurse Joy getting fucked by a Mankey and kissed by Leaf was hot as fuck. Loved Chapter 2!


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  • From The_Desert_Dancer on January 17, 2017

    First Chapter is hot as fuck! Loved seeing Leaf's mom getting fucked by a Ninetails. The sex with Daisy was alright, but didnt do much for me. Bulbasaur and Leaf going at it though definitely did..

    -Ace

     

     


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  • From ANON - lunerblade on March 20, 2016
    i wonder if you read pokemon special because coincidentally in that version blue (the female) started out as a theif. that was how she got her squrtle.
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  • From ANON - Ttowen on February 07, 2015
    hey just wanted to let you know that you are doing an amazing job on the story! You wouldn't happen to be accepting more oc trainers/teams would you?
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  • From ANON - guest on August 08, 2014
    I cant find pokemon angels story iv tried looking it up where can i find it
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  • From ANON - PokemonAngel69 on August 03, 2014
    thank you so much for putting in my OC! I really enjoyed this chapter. It was super hot. Other than a few minor additions to Megan's and Charmeleon's personalities it was perfect. Keep writing and just email me when you add the next chapter!
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  • From Destroyahirismix666 on July 30, 2014
    Don't ask why, but the image of a small Machop watching Leaf, like a stalker, made me start cracking up.
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  • From ANON - Abby on July 27, 2014
    Hi! First of all, I just wanted to say I am a HUGE fan of your story. I actually can't find many good Pokemon stories like this, but yours is by far the best I've ever read! It actually inspired me to write my own 'Pokemon Lust' story (I hope it's okay that I use that. I'm not too good with story titles and I think that really fits the story) and I'm planning on putting it up in the next few days. I wanted to do it with Pokemon Platinum because frankly, that's my favorite game. Anyway, I just wanted to say love your work, keep it up, you're doing great.
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  • From LittleSlutNamedGrace on July 05, 2014
    O.O I would love to have Blue as my rival just for the sex!!! ^.~ A great chapter Adam.
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  • From LittleSlutNamedGrace on July 05, 2014
    -moans ans my fingers pump into my pussy- Chapter one was fucking amaziing!
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on May 28, 2014
    Wasn't really a fan of the lemon for this one. You know why :/
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  • From Destroyahirismix666 on May 14, 2014
    This story...
    I've read several of your assorted works, and the majority of them are really great to read as pure plain pornos. This is different though. Unlike most other multi-chaptered stories, you're goal is smut along with a retelling of a pokemon travel that is similar to one of the games.
    Leaf is a slut, flat out slut. You don't skirt the issue. She takes her 'weaknesses' for sexual intercourse and internal dopamine release, and embraces them. It does set up for some interesting events, the way she lets herself get used and uses herself. That said, you do bring forth various pokemon battles, and I actually find myself re-reading the story for the duels just as much as I do for the blatant smut. You have given her a brain capable of thinking on some level, even though I'd love to see her use it more in places other then bartering and battling. Leaf has almost NO moral limits, making for fun times that everyone wishes they could have. The characters are not always the same types, giving us variety. (even though they almost always look 'perfect' with little to no bad blemishes. Scars don't count. You don't really find anyone that Leaf would have an 'aversion' to). And while I like development in character and world, this is an Adult+ story, to expect any world explanation or major character development is bloody stupid.
    I'll confess though, it's hard for me to enjoy your work to the fullest extent for two reasons:
    1): This is my problem, I am not a Pokemon fan. I fell out of the fanbase after the Johto League arc in the anime ended, picked back up in the 7th gen/season/whatnot, and lost interest again. I'd love to get back in the series now, but when I see how many god forsaken pokemon there are, needless to say, I realize that it would take to much time that I don't have, JUST to re-learn the main representative pokemon from each generation and type would be mind-numbing enough.
    2): You have great description, but no punctuation. No Exclamation Points (!), No Question Marks (?), and no periods (.) Everything becomes really hard to read and enjoy. This problem has been consistent throughout this entire work, and I'll have to check your other works for it. You have no idea how much more exciting a smut scene can be if you have a scream ended with an Exclamation, or how one's own mind will snap back into focusing on the story when a question is asked. It's weird, because other then that and the occasional capitalization error, your story is grammatically great.
    The only other 'issue' I've had that is noteworthy is that the LeafXHuman Male f*cking has become a pretty similar routine recently. Head, Vagina, ass, or something of that nature. Just needs a bit of a shake-up.

    You have a talent, don't let it go to waste, especially not on this story. You've done a great job, keep it going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2014
    Is Sean going to be a recurring character? I like him, he seems to be quite interesting . in personality and so far is the only character who tied with Leaf. Also I am starting to see some repitition with the chapters. Almost every chapter with a human male tends to follow this pattern, mouth, pussy, and then ass. Could it be possible to do something like item insertion to spice things up? Having Leaf be Sean's slave would open more possibilities than you expect.
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  • From ANON - poke a pokemon on May 13, 2014
    Wow... been a while since I saw Sean, and he is more perverted than I remember. You definitely set up some kind of thing between them, even if its unintentional . Is Sean going to be Leaf's love interest? Or will she become his slave? I remember Sean being a patient and respectful guy at times, so I can safely say that Sean won't force Leaf to abandon her journey if she was his slave. Regardless, I hope Sean appears again soon. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Da Anon on May 13, 2014
    Is that the same Sean from Johto Heat by TheBreeder ?! I never thought he would show up in Lust Green. I hope to see him again as it looks like that he and Leaf seem to really connect. It would have b been great to have Sean show Leaf how enjoyable it was to have Rhydon use Horn Drill on her pussy. There is always next time hopefully
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