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Reviews for Forever Clockwork

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - LoginNoggin on August 06, 2015
    Can't believe nobody's reviewed this since 2013. Guess nobody goes on AFF anymore
    I only come on it to read this story. Btw, do you post this anywhere else?

    I don't have much to say. I love the fic and I wish there was a subscribe button. I think the same about OCs; I don't take them lightly in fics at all. But yours is one of the few I fell in love with (figuratively saying). I can't wait to see what hers and Wily's relationship leads to ;D

    ...pft, probably nothing much.

    Speaking of Wily, the scene between him and Bass (hooray for getting to see a bit of him in the story!) is refreshing in a way. Throughout most of the story, Wily is seen as a fatherly figure who's trying to do the right thing for robots in his own quirky way. His dialogue and behavior towards Bass shows us, as a reminder, that he's still aggressive, kinda rude guy (or should I say extremely snarky, snarkier than he already is), and impatient like the bad guy we know him as.

    But he's still loving and caring towards Bass and that's cute.

    ...One more thing while I'm at it: being the hater he is, I still feel bad for that Suresh guy.
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  • From ANON - Draco Falconi on February 15, 2015
    This might simply be the best Mega Man fic I have ever read. Not many people pull off humanizing Wily, you're one of few that can.
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  • From Kakashifan727 on April 22, 2014
    feels shorter, but still good.
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  • From Kakashifan727 on January 13, 2014
    Great work so far. Been avoiding the net for a while, so I was finally able to catch up.
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  • From Kakashifan727 on November 12, 2013
    Enjoyed this one. Wily is made to be quite a sympathetic villan, and I enjoy it. I find I agree with him.
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  • From ANON - KF727 on August 21, 2013
    That was one of my problems with the Megaman series; glad to see someone else is trying to pick up Inafune's slack. More so with ZX though, and the Zero series...I like ow you portray Wily, he seems more human. Never heard of the Stardroids; I'm guessing they were a comic only thing.
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  • From Kakashifan727 on June 19, 2013
    This is so great. You deserve more. Interactions with both the MC, Wily and the bots are interesting and neat to see.
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  • From Kakashifan727 on March 03, 2013
    Finish this now. small spelling and grammar errors, but a damn good piece.
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