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Reviews for The Transformation of Shepard

By : Libertatem
  • From ninesenshi on November 30, 2013
    Chap 17.. Good stuff. So nice to see Jack raped and knocked up.
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on November 20, 2013
    Well, nobody ever said Jack was smart.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2013
    I'm loving every dam second of this story, and I'm seeing trouble in the form of a futa!jack for Oriana if she stays in that Cerberus uniform.
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  • From LadyLuck1990 on October 16, 2013
    another great chapter! :D I can't wait to see what happens next and I hope you put Samara in a chapter soon...I'd love to see how that turned out lol. She is my favorite team mate aside from Kasumi. :)
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  • From ninesenshi on October 15, 2013
    Mostly enjoyed chap 13, but Shepard is no one's bitch. She should have been the one pounding Jack.
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  • From ScarletVenus on September 13, 2013
    Conspirasy and sex. Good combination. Loving this Shepard you've written.
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on September 12, 2013
    It seems like EDI, Miranda, or somebody else on the Normandy should notice what Jack is doing.
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on September 10, 2013
    I really want this Shepherd to encounter Liara again.
    Although its possible T'Soni could be repulsed by Shepherd's new 'addition.'
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on September 06, 2013
    Jack's kind of a monster.
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on July 31, 2013
    I keep wondering how Liara will react to the NEW AND IMPROVED Commander Shepherd.
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  • From ScarletVenus on July 05, 2013
    Chapter Two was better than the first. Granted, the story feels like it has a very abrupt start--like it should have had a prologue chapter to show Shepard getting where she is when her new cock shows up, but anyway. Loved the sex with Miri. She's second on my list of Mass Effect characters who need to be shoved down and have something rammed in their ass (First is Diana Allers). The story flowed a little better and the detail was nice. Again, solid work and I'm looking forward to Chapter 3
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  • From ScarletVenus on July 05, 2013
    Read Chapter one and I liked it. It was short--a bit short for my tastes, but still it did a good job. Would love to see the Kelly and Shepard sex stretched out over a little longer period, maybe with a few more positions and working up to a climax. I know its a sci-fi fantasy story, but it feels implausable to have Shepard gushing cum within a few minutes. As a fellow writer, I reccomend stretching it out, working up towards a single climax per chapter, but that's just me.

    Now, Shepard as a fute I can totally see and it's something I've been planning in my own story for a while. Glad to see it pop up here. I liked the inclusion. Good work. Solid effort overall and I hope to read more.
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  • From ANON - rukia on July 04, 2013
    The writing is fine. I was looking forward to the Miranda/Shepard confrontation. But I was a little disappointed with the direction you chose. Miranda in charge would have suited my tastes more. It could have been awesome. Oh well. Maybe chapter 3 will be good?
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  • From ANON - SailorNemesis on July 03, 2013
    Still simple, but fun. Looking forward to Aria getting the same treatment. Would be better with longer, more detailed sex.
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on July 03, 2013
    In real life, after an incident like this, Shepherd would probably fall victim to 'friendly fire' the next time she went into combat with Miranda.
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