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Reviews for Slaves of Cerberus

By : NakedOwlMan
  • From ANON - Matt on April 11, 2014
    Liara/Clone chapters are really fun. Enjoyed that portion of the update.

    This banquet they mentioned sounds like it is going to be just dreadful.

    Shepard and Liara still seem to have their wits intact; not mind-broken yet. I think Brooks and the Clone are making a mistake by keeping them together. It would be a lot easier for them to lose trust in one another if they were separated.

    Thanks for the update. I find myself logging in a few times every week to check for updates. Not really doing that for any other stories on this site.
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  • From ANON - Matt on March 16, 2014
    Your Miranda/Eclipse Sister encounter in Quarian Directives was terrific dude.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2014
    fucking awesome!!! not gonna lie i was really prepared to abandon this fic if everything kept going in cerberus favor. but now i cant wait to see what happens on the normandy... i really want a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - Matt on March 02, 2014
    Thanks for the new update; especially since it was another long chapter.

    MVP of the chapter was Brooks. Telling the Shepard clone to shut the fuck up is gold and was a total gift to the readers. I guess Shepard's greatness doesn't lie in her DNA; her experiences and her environment made her who she is. This clone is clearly a cheap knock-off.

    I feel bad for the Lawson girls. Obviously this went terrible for them. I also feel bad for the real Shepard. She will probably be punished for the actions of her friends. And the entire Cerberus staff should be on edge; I think we are about to see a mole hunt.

    I don't really understand Cerberus right now. What their goals or objectives are.

    Good luck Kasumi. Quite a dangerous mission she is undertaking. Don't trust anyone girl.
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  • From ANON - Anon2 on February 28, 2014
    @Anon: Hehe, and I on the other hand hope they remain slaves... forever :D

    To quote Maya Brooks: "This is where legends come to die"
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2014
    freaking awesome! i cant wait for the next chapter. I really want a freaking happy ending for our hero's after all the shit they've been through.
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  • From ANON - Sakreh on February 24, 2014
    Miranda betrayed humanity, Cerberus and resurrected the cheap copy of Shepard... I hope her glorious ass is given the hell it deserves :D

    Oriana already know how to serve a woman, she could a popular fucktoy for the new Cerberus...
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  • From ANON - Matt on February 22, 2014
    Chapter 42. This was a deceptive update. Only one new chapter, but it was really long.

    Mainly just a set-up chapter. But some interesting stuff went down. The new Cerberus basically dealt with the old guard. I ended up feeling pretty bad for Miranda by the time things ended; I think she should be ready for some harsh treatment down the road.

    And man. I think the general brought up a good point. It's pretty surprising Cerberus would be willing to follow a clone. I guess their goals don't necessarily match up with what the Illusive Man envisioned.
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on February 21, 2014
    Morgan!

    NOOOOOOO!

    Man, what a cliffhanger!

    Morgan can't die now! She just got Miranda!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on February 17, 2014
    Such an excellent new chapter with Ashley and Morgan!

    I was on the edge of my seat and in the end you picked the least obvious way to end it. Anyone else would have had Ash take her vengeance, but I love it that Ash might have broken. Not everyone should leave this place, if anyone does at all.
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  • From ANON - Matt on February 10, 2014
    Wow NOM. Your output went way up. Lots of new chapters up.

    Some pretty interesting developments took place too. Really interesting how Brooks continues to refer to the Original as Shepard while Liara has started calling the clone by that name. Quite a contrast.

    Shepard and Liara making plans. It sounds good. But knowing your stories; things are certain to go horribly wrong.

    Keep writing. I plan to keep reading. This is quality stuff!
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  • From ANON - Bob on February 06, 2014
    I dont know if you will ever read this, but can you please have more shepherd? i dont understand why you suddenly just stopped, the ashley thing was pretty good, the brooks scenes were amazing because it was the only thing with shepherd, kasumi and jacob were pretty good i guess, the whole jack thing i hated until recently with the whole virginity thing ( even though it was barely a few sentences long ), can you bring back shepherd please
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on January 20, 2014
    Incredible story! Is it weird that I want more of Morgan + Ashley? Morgan is such a weirdo, I love it! Keep her up!
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  • From newenglandee on January 13, 2014
    What you've done to Shepherd is OFFENSIVE. Seriously. You bastardize everything that was good and memorable about the character. Good about the game. You should be disgusted with yourself for this poorly conceived and badly written TRASH that PISSES on one of my FAVORITE game series. FUCK. YOU.
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  • From ANON - Scott on January 12, 2014
    Thank you for new chapter. Cerberus sure is devious to re-involve Jack in all of this.
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