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Reviews for Tomb Raider: The Braid Of Aphrodite

By : Muhabba
  • From snake1980 on May 15, 2014
    sorry to see this story end but still it was great and like how lara doesn't really want it to end. cant wait to see what your next story going to be. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - BOO YEAHHAHAHA! on May 10, 2014
    FAPLAYLOOYA! In the annals of cum stain enducing degredation of the english language in regards to this hot little pretend babe, only one other time has anything been more amazingly erotic: three words, shouted... "Roth! I'm coming!" My still throbbing cock salutes you... fap.
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  • From ninesenshi on May 10, 2014
    Part 4, good stuff. Glad Lara is gonna stay like that.
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  • From ANON - Boo Yeahhhhhhhhhh!!!! on February 08, 2014
    Absolute Faplessness. Mmmmmm refreshing
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  • From ANON - kevin on February 03, 2014
    The only thing that would make it better was if the school was an all girls school. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - BOOOO YEAH! on January 09, 2014
    Your second chapter is more fap inspiring than the entirety of most multi chapter stories I've read. Hell the security guard scene is the most amazingly boner inducing scene of it's kind... hold on... here comes another endorsement... YES!!!! TAKE 'THAT' CEILING!!! Yeah, you know you needed another coat. =d
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  • From snake1980 on December 29, 2013
    just found this story and have to say its great so far and so looking forward to the next chapter since I can see a orgy happening. cant wait to see what u have planed for the future chapters of this story. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2013
    This is an old story that I know from way back. I like it. But are you posting it because you have a Part 3 planned, or just to share it on this site? Either way, thank you for the story!
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  • From MorbidFantasy on December 15, 2013
    I lolled at "Professor Cumberbatch". Not very subtle there hehe.

    I'm reviewing this even though it's premise and genre are kind of outside of my normal preferences. But it was an amusing piece, so here's to me saying I dug it.
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on December 15, 2013
    I was hoping for a threesome between Lara, her new boy-toy, and his sister.
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  • From JustS on December 14, 2013
    First of all, I liked your scenario. However, I think there was too much pre-amble to get to the sex and when it did start it was jarringly sudden. Yes, I realise Lara was struck with the effect of the Braid but it feels like it needed a better transition. When we did get to the action there wasn't a huge amount of description despite the lengthy set up, maybe that's just your style but for me it made the chapter feel a bit lopsided.

    And what the hell was up with the kid calling Lara mum? Is this what Americans think English children call older women or something? That really took me out of it.

    All in all, IMO this is a better than average fic but could be greatly improved with a few small changes.
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