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Reviews for The High Cost of Perfection

By : Nicker
  • From Sundowner on February 14, 2014
    Great ending to an excellent story. You did such an amazing job with this and I'm eagerly awaiting your next story!
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  • From ANON - Inletsurfer7 on February 11, 2014
    Another great chapter, it was awesome how shephard almost lost it with liara, you did a great job describing the utter confusion/rage that comes with horrible news/realizations. I also liked how miranda had a little victory in exposing liara, a good finish to my favorite character. Keep up the amazing work
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  • From ANON - Tia on February 08, 2014
    I'm not sure why I'm enjoying this, but the story is good, and so is every scene. This is also the best Miranda/Jack I've ever read. Well done!
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  • From ANON - dayumn dayumn DAYUMN on February 06, 2014
    This story is amazing; nice work! I'm guess that, from the tone of the story so far, Miranda's story is not ending on a pleasant note... But I hope she at least manages to ruin Liara without Oriana getting hurt. Who knows? CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER :D
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  • From ANON - Inletsurfer on February 05, 2014
    It's such a great story, i say don't end it here, make it a happy end Miranda has gone through too much to deserve anything less i. This one.
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  • From ANON - hohoho on January 26, 2014
    This story is getting better and better, man I love your other stories but this one is looking to beat them. Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ninesenshi on January 25, 2014
    Ah, the turn. Well I will bow out now before things get even worse.
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  • From ANON - ravenite33 on January 22, 2014
    It`s an interesting "What if?" this. I remember at the end of LotSB, Liara says that having a purpose will keep her honest. Well this is pretty much "what if the power did corrupt Liara?" Apparently she becomes a supervillain. Like I said an interesting take. I like it.
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  • From ninesenshi on January 21, 2014
    I realized after my last review that you were the author who...let's just say dealt very harshly with Liara in a previous fic (for the sake of spoiling others). I have no idea why you would like Miranda and hate Liara, but I'll read this for now and hope for some more Miranda suffering. The sex with Jack though was way too pleasant so I may be disappointed.
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  • From ANON - ohhhh man on January 21, 2014
    Now that there is an awesome chapter... Can't wait to see where this goes, it's gonna get worse and worse for her, or is she gonna manage to turn things around! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH :D

    excellent job seriously, ten outta ten
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  • From ANON - hotdiggity on January 19, 2014
    hot damn thats a good story, i hope liara gets wuts comin 2 her but i have a feelin this story aint goin that way? broshepard must be able to tell somethings wrong HUEHEUHEUE
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  • From ninesenshi on January 19, 2014
    Well, it was interesting. Somewhat sexy. I am very fond of canon Liara and did not really like this version of her, but you came up with a reasonable and logical `evil' persona for her so it's workable. I do not like canon Miranda, so I am always up for seeing her abused. Hopefully Liara will decide to teach her some more `lessons' until Miranda really breaks and becomes her slave.
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