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Reviews for Pucker Up, Princess

By : megadeth425
  • From Bronzehawk86 on February 15, 2019

    Hi do you do commissions?


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  • From ANON - boldfullmetal on March 23, 2015
    Well that was very interesting and very well written. It even gave me a few ideas for some stories of my own. Lawson/Zero pairings are sort of a guilty pleasure of mine, and I'm glad you decided to go the non rape route. In my mind, the scenario you described is really really close to what I imagine would play out canonically. They both hate/ respect one another and just use each other equally to relieve stress. Nothing wrong about that!

    I just hope you show in later chapters how this arrangement all began. Maybe they got drunk one night and fooled around, maybe mordin told the crew that they needed to find ways of relieving stress. Maybe kelly joked one too many times about how perfect they would be together... IDK, but it feels like some plausible back story is needed. Maybe they both went on eachothers loyalty missions and thats where the understanding began, who knows, I'll leave it in your hands.

    As for the strap-on part, I literally can't wait to read it!

    Good Job, you got my FAP seal of approval!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2015
    Beautiful stuff, really well written dynamic between Miranda/Jack. The banter and quips exchanged between them made the sex that much better.
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