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Reviews for Indoctrination

By : Raptor_hQ
  • From Bronzehawk86 on February 15, 2019

    Hi do you do commissions?


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  • From ANON - Sharpe on January 02, 2016
    Good story. Can't wait for the next characters.
    The only problem I can find is that the chapters... are more or less all the same.
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  • From Cedricus on December 30, 2015
    I kinda hope Liara ends up embracing eternity with whatever fucks her so she gets pregnant with a Reaper Asari baby.
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  • From JayDee on July 04, 2015
    Just read the first chapter. I liked it! The whole transformation while fucking thing especially appealed to me, with the cyborg side taking over.

    I really must play Mass Effect some day.
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  • From ANON - Metal Izanagi on June 29, 2015
    Just read the Traynor chapter, and it was amazing. It's refreshing to see a darker fate shown for the women of ME, in contrast to the pairings/happy endings that a lot of other folks write. A few minor grammar mistakes and typos, but it doesn't change that your work is...enjoyable? Not sure if that's the proper word, but hopefully you take this as the positive review that it is, and continue to share your writing talent with others.
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  • From ANON - Fapman on June 29, 2015
    It's a very nice idea you got going with this story, but you need some diversity. Every chapter it roughly follows the same plot just with a new girl
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  • From ANON - Izanagi on June 14, 2015
    Amazing work, so far. I'd love to see your take on how Samantha Traynor might get what she needs from a bunch of Husks.
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  • From AlexandraS90 on May 23, 2015
    I love all the chapters so far. Seems like Shepard's getting a little low on friends, though!
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  • From nothinghere on May 09, 2015
    I love the stories!

    I can't wait till Shepard gets hers.
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  • From AlexandraS90 on May 06, 2015
    Wow, a fantastic, darkly sexy premise, and two of my favourite ME girls already covered. I'd love to see Ashley in a potential third chapter.
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  • From ANON - Matt Allen on May 05, 2015
    Pleeeease do Liara next.
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