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Reviews for Under Tail

By : Latham02
  • From Infinity-Silverwolf on November 03, 2015
    I really enjoyed this story and think how it's written is very well done though to be a bit confusing when it come to the monsters in a way. Anyways I like the double view of each path and how drastically different they are from each other.
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  • From Roanes-ShadowGaurd on November 01, 2015
    I personally liked the way you handled this chapter. I know that it would be more work for you, but I kind of hope you write all other confrontation chapters like this. Which ever version you chose though, I can only say this. Stay Determined!
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  • From ANON - That other guy on October 31, 2015
    I like the pacifist better but I really like that both are endings are here, though for final boss stuff, you might epwant three chapters for that.
    Anyway, I noticed this:
    "You encouraged Rana by telling her that, as long as she believed in herself, all of her *hopes and dreams* would come true
    OST reference much? I can't blame you it's gooooooooooooooooooooooood.
    Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From Cedricus on October 31, 2015
    Probably liked the pacifist version the most but enjoyed the impregnation part of the no mercy version(if the normal game's evil mode could be called "genocide mode" this is more "repopulation mode" :P).

    I'm guessing from the cherry question that the no mercy version will have quite a few taken from monsters? :)
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  • From ANON - AFPgamer on October 19, 2015
    I'm amazed that you can turn this story into smut and at the same time, keep the original tone in tact. I do hope you continue this story, I find it incredibly interesting and, not to mention, erotic.

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  • From ANON - Roflpilot on October 18, 2015
    This was great. Definitely looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - That other guy on October 17, 2015
    A. Cool, you are writing the undertale with save jokes.
    B. Spare the froggitt, I like pacifism
    C. Are you gonna update mushroom story soon?
    D. NYEH HEH HEH
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  • From ANON - Dertun on October 17, 2015
    I think, in order to please both crowds, you should show both of the options.
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  • From ANON - Yulio on October 17, 2015
    I think that the froggit should be raped in return.

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  • From ANON - Dan on October 14, 2015
    P.S i love how you make story about game also hope you can continued the mushroom story. Thank you
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  • From ANON - The Q on October 14, 2015
    Love it. I say let her live. Also, I have a good feeling that you won't abandon this fanfic after 2-3 chapters, unlike so many other writers. I say this because your other story has quite a few chapters and was semi-recently updated as well.
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  • From ANON - Reviewer on October 14, 2015
    Cute story! Which ending(s) do you plan on writing out? I quite liked this chapter and eagerly await more.
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  • From ANON - Dan on October 13, 2015
    I say let her live i want to go the hero path.
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  • From ANON - The Todd on October 13, 2015
    Wish You'd Done A Female Frisk Version Instead Five!
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