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Reviews for Taming the Raider

By : BoobsWriter
  • From shade333 on April 01, 2016
    This chapter was a great build up. Im glad to see you had her maintain her personality and didnt go the mind broken route. I would love to see some flashbacks to when zip and allister had there fun with Lara. Id love to see them have Lara go on one of her adventures but with a sexual twist. Like maybe they have her fuck a chief of an african tribe in order to get an artifact. Another idea would be them having a charity event where a lucky fan gets to spend the day with Lara and they make Lara seduce the fan. The fan could be some nerdy younger 18 year old who Lara would normally never give the time of day to and she is humiliated to be having sex with. Another thing I would like to see is Lara verbally being uncooperative during the acts to help show shes not mind broken. An example of that would be her saying derogatory comments to the fan during the sex like insulting his stamina and size or her threatening zip and allister. Im looking forward to the next part and if you ever do decide to do commissions I would love to get one.
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  • From Sammycolt on April 01, 2016
    It's an incredible story you're writing here. I really enjoyed the attention to detail, Lara being a huge tease (who now seems to get her comeuppance) is a great scenario! I wish we got to see a little more of Lara's initial "training" though, when she realizes what happened to her. Maybe you could at some point tell parts of that via flashback?!

    Overall, you're an incredible writer. I have only seen one other author write Tomb Raider as well as you did so far. Sadly the guy hasn't been around for a few years, so I'm glad you're here now;)
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  • From MorbidFantasy on March 30, 2016
    Yesssss digital brainwashing. Keep this up! My advice though is make Lara aware that what she's doing is wrong, and have every instance of obedience be very conflicted for her.
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  • From JViper on March 27, 2016
    Wow! Didn't expect anymore of these stories on this site. It's such a rare treat to find a really descriptive and hot story. Usually it's one or the other.

    So far, chapter 4, this has been an incredible read. The pace is just right. Each scene, taking a chapter, has served a purpose and there's not a single dull moment where I was skipping parts.

    The characters are for the most part, since it is erotica, close to their personality. At least the paper thin ones from the legend trilogy. Lara is confident and the guys are a little bit subdued, even if they're plotting against her.

    Hopefully, you don't go to fast now that their plan seem to be going smoothly. I'd hate to see such a good build-up be thrown to waste by rushing to sex slave territory.

    One minor grip I have is that you didn't fully show the cockteasing bits you allude to. We can all imagine because we played the games and have been following Lara for some time, but it is not told in the story so far. The only real bit of it was when she puts Zip's cock away. That was really hot and should be explored more before turning her into a toy, as the name of the program Alister and Zip use seem to suggest.

    Finally, if you ever consider taking commissions please contact me at jviper.hf AT gmail DOT com. I'd love to support you creating more stories like this one.
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  • From DrkVrtx on March 26, 2016
    The opening chapter for this is something else, I'm sure you had a lot of fun with it. Vividly descriptive in all the right ways, the picture of Lara is painted so clearly that chapter could probably just be a story all on its own. It's certainly my favourite so far, if that's surprising to hear. Sure I'll be revisiting it for, uh, reasons.
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  • From shade333 on March 25, 2016
    Im enjoying this story so far. By any chance are you taking suggestions for future chapters or ideas for a new story?
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