Reviews for Lara Croft and the Forbidden Temple

BY : Jackass2016


  • From SailorNemesis on April 11, 2017

    Chap2, thanks for panther scene.  Would like more of that.  And snakes.



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  • From SailorNemesis on April 09, 2017

    Way too much reader teasing.  The scene with the wolves was such a disappointment and then you did it again with the panther.  The snake scene was great, would like more of that.  But you need to stop teasing a deliver.  And dildo chairs are boring.  Bring on the bestiality.



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  • From AFFModerator on April 09, 2017

    Please correct your disclaimer.

    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. You must use the actual name of the fandom.  Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough.

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