What if Solo approaches Dr. Lalinde from the classic series, unless instead of making it a secret, he has the poor bastard known as Dr. Light watch, tied to a chair and small cock out to see how Solo steals Lalinde.

oh nice nice. maybe i oughtta do my own star force fic! nice to see someone who actually knows what this series is!

Hi this is JL Davenport here,

I feel bad using this as a way to respond to you, since I don't know anything about Mega Man so I can't actually give you a proper review at the same time.

In regards to your own review on A Change of Tactics though:

I've got absolutely no problem with you doing something that's similar to mine. There's another story I absolutely love called Robin's Mansion that started just the same, inspired by my work and headed out to do his own take on a similar concept. All it means is more stories I enjoy for me to read!

Obviously, I'll be disappointed if you copy it beat for beat or take ideas across or anything like that, but I don't think that's what you're intending, it sounded like you wanted to write something original that just had a similar fetish behind it- Robin harem, probably some NTR stuff.

So yeah! Do it man, I wanna read it for sure. I'd love to hear what you're cooking up or what ideas you're working on if you wanna jam about them. Hit me up on FFN or something (somewhere where you can actually PM people...). Or, if not, just hit me up when you post it and I'll check it out.

I'd advise you not to only post here though. This site is practically dead these days, put it on Ao3, Hentaifoundry and/or FFN.

-J

This chapter is decent. I won't say it's out of this world amazing or anything like that... but this is decent. And by that milestone, it's better than 99% of the stuff posted to AFF, so take that as you will. The lack of smut in this chapter intrigues me; it means that you're doing something a little beyond mindless sex. Which is good. It's also clear that you're rapidly improving in terms of pacing, dialogue, and slightly in grammar as well. Which is also very good. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more.

You update really late. But glad that Wendy isn't a loli here. Would have dropped this shit otherwise.

You not making this chapter be smut is weird, but I don't mind. Seems like you can write stories instead of just pure smut.

Huh... an NTR fic with several chapters of smut has one that isn't smut? Are you telling me there's a real story here?

I'm interested now. 

That better not be Wendy! 

I swear if you make Solo fuck a loli, I'm done with this!

Though you did refer to her as a woman, so... 

... Okay, I admit, that was shocking. I was really hating how much Solo was, but seeing how he just just got that kind of punishment, I am liking this crossover fic. 

Do you think you can find shorter image links? They're causing the rest of the chapters to go completely past the border and just makes the whole thing a headache to read.

Wow, just another fag that likes to suck on an emo kid's cock. I thought it was bad enough with Sasuke fics popping out, but now it even stains into Megaman? Disgusting.

The fuck man?! How could you go post this shit! Sonia cheating is one thing, since people pair Sonia and Solo, but Hope?! Geo's MOTHER?! That's bullshit! One time sex is enough to break her will? Like hell it would be!

Holy shit! I didn't even know there'd be a fic about Solo. And a harem one at that. 

I played Starforce, but he never struck as the harem type. But that was a really hot lemon. 

Another good chapter. Less grammar mistakes this time, and the shower scene especially was great.

The story is solid - but there's a few obvious problems that I can pick out. Numerous run out sentences, strange words that shouldn't be there, and a lack of description in certain areas. Other than that, it's pretty good.

If you want to discuss this a bit further, hit me on up my email. I can help you out a bit more if you'd like. Email : bige2955@gmail.com