Reviews for Upgrade

BY : FieldDranzer


  • From mili on October 06, 2017

    One thing I forgot to mention in my review is this conflict:

    "The only signs of any life having existed on the planet" and later "she would have to walk through a highly populated human city and find a laboratory amidst the officials".

    Samus was on a deserted planet, but would have to walk through a highly populated human city? If you meant she would have to walk through that city on ANOTHER planet to find help then it would be best to explicitly state that to avoid confusion. Except for that, again, excellent chapter, though I would've loved it more if Metroid had gone into a different, lower front orifice.



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  • From mili on October 06, 2017

    I liked this story except for futa which is one of my biggest squeaks and turn-offs (partly my blame since I don't know all the story codes). Each chapter being a standalone was a little disorienting at first because there was no warning.

     

    I hope you consider writing some non-futa vaginal sex and pregnancy chapters, especially ones where Samus is made helpless or very exposed by the upgrade like in first chapter. That one was the hottest. Metroid sex connected with exposure, vaginal sex, pregnancy, helplessness, gangbang would be a nice bonus.

     

    I also hope you update Novus soon, am really curious where it will go.



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