Reviews for Power in the hands of the forgotten man

BY : ItwasMerlin

  • From SailorNemesis on September 02, 2018

    I always want Dragon Age hentai.  If he is a mage at coircle tower he could start off doing Wynne.  Then when the Warden visits, Leliana and Morrigan.

    Or if you prefer DA2 setting, maybe he is a mage in Kirkwall who takes advantage of Meredeth, then Isabela and Merill.  Hope to read it some day, big fan

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  • From SandStormHero on August 24, 2018

    Seems like a good start. a little simple, but who doesn't enjoy a simple OC/Mind control story. It's like the junk food of erotica. Hopefully, the actual chapters will be longer. I would like to see more. 

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  • From ANON - Pwnage on April 07, 2018

    Just a point to add you might consider, midn control is only really interesting with Sera in this scenario given her sexuality, sex with any other female will just feel consensual regardless. So either just do Sera or have the girls be resistant.

    Pander to the non-con crowd or to the straight-turning crowd.

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  • From SailorNemesis on January 28, 2018

    Good to read from you again, hope to see full chap.  I'm always down for some Dragon Age.  Would like to see Wynne taken (she never gets enough love),  Morrigan is always fun (would like to see her shapechange to a male beast that mounts Leliana).  Desire demons have a great character design.  Hope to read some of that.

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