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Reviews for Happy birthday Joma part 2

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From IttyBittySkitty on September 27, 2018

    Oh my Arceus. Where to even start?

    Well first, getting his three favorite sluts in there was a great touch. The only problem was poor loppuny got shafted. She didn’t even get to mega evolve. Maybe a story about her being the center focus is needed ;-3

    Second, I loved the outfit for Gale, and the fact that she considers the club home enough to fuck in it. Which leads to the line about her being Jomas property. PLEEEEEEEASE expand on that. She is his, and he needs to collar her. He needs to take her up on the offer to fuck whenever when she’s in the middle of an important phone call.  PLEEEEEASE go into more detail on that 

    But this was a perfect birthday story for him, and I know both of us will enjoy it for a long time to come. 

    Skitty


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  • From Jomahawk2694 on September 27, 2018

    Thanks for the present, m8. You always know just what to

    give. Well, with the help of a certain little minx 

    Already can’t wait for next year!

    Joma 


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