chap7, well written though glory-holes not my thing.  As far as optional paths, I like both aside from the `old enemies tour', that bit seems silly and risky.  Looking forward to Sarah fully in charge with more fisting.  Maybe it will be Sarah who hits upon horses to break Lara (ah the irony of her being `broken' by horses).  Well, looking forward to more naughty fun.

Chap 6, mostly good, glad Winston is getting into it, the party went on too long.  Regarding Sarah, I want her to love Lara but be willing to do whatever it takes to keep her, so she has to go along with domming her in order to keep her.  Again, I never want Lara to escape being a slave, but I would like her to end up happy with Sarah.  And the horses.

That's my two cents.  Good story.

I vote for the public option, not least because it puts Sarah on the horns of her own dilemma and would challenge her as well. Sarah would probably at least try to treat Lara more nicely than Natla would want, and what would Natla do there? It would play into the Stockholm angle in that it sets up Sarah to be the lesser evil to Lara and Natla indisputably the greater one.

My suggestion would be Option 2; Natla send Sarah to be tutored by a pro dominatrix;

The idea of a young woman entering the strange new world of pro BDSM to ‘claim’ the woman she loves is engaging.

A BDSM club created a whole new world of potential for perversion and humiliation and can give insights into the characters both canon and OC as Sarah evolves/learns/grows from no doubt an ‘interesting’ teacher.

Watching (or reading) Lara being crushed to a regiment or program standard would be interesting as well and full of potential.

The whole scenario would serve to further individualise the story/make it stand out.

Extremely interested in what will happen next!

Very nice chapter, the best for me so far. Lara and her collecting signatures through dinner worked very well. It is a pity that men did not seize the opportunity for more perverted sexual practices with her. I can't believe they'll just need oral service when Lara Croft is defeated. I mean some breastjob, deepthroat, assjob, bondage, slapping, dancing with horse tail buttplug, ass to mouth and more. Of course there was little time for these perverted practices. The chapter as a whole worked very well and I enjoyed it. I wish more action outside the manor and a more detailed description of how Lara was in demand but unbeatable and  invincible for such men. Then the effect of filling the perverted fantasies of those men could work more. I think it would be good for the reader to describe more what they feel when is Lara finally humiliated. And still I wish a scene with a gloryhole. But please no longer sex with personal staff (Zip, Alister and others), it doesn't work for me now. It was too much. How about a mission where Lara has to make one of her former rivals a bitch for the evening. I mean Pierre or Larson. They may not be dead in this fanfiction universe.

Great chapter. Kudos on fixing plot holes certain annoying individual pointed out. 

Dinner party was amazing. It had everything - guests and servants disdainful comments and reactions, Lara whoring herself for job, and even new tattoo idea. Definitely better than generic glory hole scene. 

Building upon your 2nd idea Natla could send both girls to take slave/mistress training. It could be some remote property in the country. There you could have Lara undergo ponygirl training coupled with horse fucking others requested.

Sarah doesn't have to be evil. She could just be pragmatic. During their talk Natla would point out that without blackmail she would lose her (forced) lesbian lover, her new wardrobe, jewelry and unlimited access to Lara's fortune. But if she agree to cooperate she would keep everything. Teens feel in and out of love all the time, but diamonds are forever.

Also you may consider starting forum thread for feedback.

I love this chapter and where Winston and Sarah are going. I think that the merits of the idea with the shoulder to cry on, with or without the chastity belt, is that Sarah is intentionally inducing Stockholm Syndrome by going out of her way to be nice to Lara in ways she doesn't have to, and uses the 'fiancee' aspect to manipulate her. She reveals, at one point, that she knows exactly that Lara is being brainwashed, that she fears what Natla could do to her, all a part of manipulating Lara. And in this case blending it with the chastity belt and the aphrodisiacs where she establishes that she cares about Lara more than Lara herself.

Essentially Sarah takes matters into her own hands, and exploits that Lara no longer can rely on Winston as her emotional center. Lara never really comes to love her the way she wants, but she's Lara's sole center of stability, and and Natla decides when Lara's at home that only one person can give her the fistings she craves: Sarah. Making the thing Lara enjoys the most wielded as a weapon to use with her.

She doesn't resent Lara, she has an almost Pollyanna-ish belief that if she can play off Lara and Natla that she can get Lara to if not love her, accept her and her status as Sarah's wife. Also when they're married Lara has to take Sarah's last name, LOL. And to have their wedding night in her mother's wedding dress, which is Sarah's idea, not Natla's, and as a sign of how far and how fast she's fallen, Lara agrees.

I would like a scene where Sarah eventually realizes when Natla slips a few times too many that Lara wasn't 'slipping in her treatment' when she said she was being blackmailed.....and then uses that to blackmail Lara herself into the fear of her doing something with it and leaving to an increasingly paranoid and broken Lara's imagination. The irony is that Sarah herself has no idea what to do with anything she'd suggest and Lara ends up shackling herself without ever quite realizing.

Or alternately, Sarah figures it out, and uses it to manipulate Lara in a related but much more insidious fashion to Natla by spending time feigning giving her a shoulder to cry on and manipulating Lara's emotions as much as Natla does and Lara ends up genuinely in love with Sarah for real....only for it to turn out that she went from frying pan to fire.

This one was a mixed bag for me.

I don't like how you changed cover up from Lara doing humiliating things because she secretly craves and enjoys them, to whole ordeal being some kind of therapy for her nymphomania. How would that even work? Lets force Lara to have so much sex that she will eventually hate it? Sarah may not be the brightest person, but even she would have hard time buying that. Also why would Lara beg Natla to stay if this was therapy? With her wealth she can get any therapists she wants.

At first I was against Winston involvement, but I guess you are trying to accommodate most of your reviewers, and it worked quite well with drugs and subliminal conditioning. That being said I don't think Natla would ever want to have sex with an old servant. She should hire prostitute and record whole thing to have more leverage over Lara. 

I absolutely despise 'daddy' nickname.

Training session was great. Although Lara gave up rather quickly for seasoned adventurer used to discomfort and pain. (Back to therapy problem. How would whipping her serve as part of it?)

I was disappointed that none of her employees reacted to her new tattoo.

In regard your future plans I don't think they work with current setting. Blackmail works for now because Lara thinks she can get out of it and endures degradation to buy time. But why would she agree to becoming pornstar/prostitute or signing all her money to Sarah and marrying her? "Hey Lara do this or you will lose all your money and by this I mean lose all your money and become sex slave." It's silly.
Especially when Lara could make a decent living even without her fortune based on her fame and connections.

Natla needs more blackmail material for your ideas to be plausible. Maybe drug Lara to get her credentials (or much hotter - put her in chastity, feed aphrodisiac and later exchange credentials for permission to orgasm) and perform some illegal transactions in her name.

Hope this wasn't overly harsh and still looking forward to next chapters.

I liked chap5, though I wish we had spent more time on the fisting with Sarah.  When Natla has Winston under the drug she should really question him to make sure if anyone else is working secretly with Lara, though I would be surprised if Zipp really wanted to give up all his new perks.

I like the `porn star' idea, specifically about the public knowing the show is being done with real sex scenes.  That is super degrading.  Looking forward to Lara being a married slut (who gives over her property in a pre-nup) and fun with horses.

Enjoyed the story so far,

Surprised by how many people want horse sex haha! Don't really care for bestiality but I can always skip past that inevitable scene.

Really excited for Lara to start being passed around further. I know there has to be a breaking in period where she comes to accept her new life, but once her comrades have had their fun I want her public image to be ruined and her to be used by the public.

Hi, I enjoyed your work. I like connecting both universes, but the emphasis is on the classics.

My ideas for the next chapters:

1. Winston might be drugged (viagra or something) and demand anal sex. It would be very humiliating for Lara if Natla had a recording. It would show how perverse Winston was when his mind was overwhelmed by the desire for Lara.

2. Lara could gain an advantage in her future chapters (I mean her escape, defense plan) but only for a moment. Then she would be punished.

3. Next putting her in to jail for life-sentenced prisoners (they cannot speak about sex with her in public) could be a good opportunity for hardcore group sex.

Can you imagine beautiful Lara Croft and extremely horny prisoners who haven't seen a woman in 20 years? Oh, God, I regret her pussy and anus. I think breastjob, assjob, blowjob, vaginal, anal, double anal and double vaginal, facial bukkake would be a common need in prison.

It would be good if the prisoners were given her wardrobe and could rape her body in all their sexy suits (catsuit, classic, sola wetsuit and many more). I can imagine scene how is Lara placed in to cell in her sexy catsuit (each cell could be introduced, what a prisoner is inside, what brutal or sexual crimes he did). She couldn't even blink with her eyes and had a giant black cock deep in her ass and a ripped latex catsuit :D

In the jail could be villains, who she had met in battle once.

4. I was thinking about a chapter where Lara does gloryhole sex. It's pretty anonymous. Of course, the camera takes Lara's facial details and expressions when she is forced to take huge penises into all her body holes.

5. I would like return chapter "Lara back at school" as a sex teacher. I remember on Anjelica commands in your previous work. It was a great chapter.

Chap4 was hot and I usually dont like orgies.  I hope Sarah marries Lara.  Still looking forward to horse sex.  I would think that after seeing so much debasement of Lara, Winston will finally just lose it and do her.  I dont want Lara saved.  She should end this as Sarah's slut-wife.

Great story so far. I especially like these little fragments from other characters perspective.

I hope before you start passing Lara around we get to see more slave training. Maybe Sarah decides to surprise Lara and build her full fleged sex dungeon or maybe Natla suggest hiring professional dominatrix to help girls settle in their new roles. Naturally all sponsored by Croft fortune.

Btw you mixed Sam and Sarah at the end of last chapter.

Damn, this is some high quality fanfic. When Lara gets passed to her enemies, I hope that there will be some intense BDSM (or even torture). Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.