Reviews for Tomb Raider: Natla’s Revenge.By : CrossroadsMk2 |
Nice work, forced sex with Winston could be fun.
Nice story. Keep up the good work. Why did Natla let Lara take off her slave collar though? I loved that.
Chap2 was pretty sexy. The mud sex was well done. Looking forward to Sarah getting in some serious fisting and letting Lara's horses in on the action. I seriously hope Lara does not get out of this! No rescues or escapes please.
Fantastic first chapter. All the characters introduced with their motivations clearly implied, the scene and stakes set. Does exactly what an opening chapter should. I do like the addition of the original character Sarah. Young fangirl in nursing a crush on Lara while they're surrounded by lecherous men who hold a grudge against her? Promising. I do like the single explicit scene as well. Though I hope lara get to keep an appealingly tight snatch. Maybe Natla is irritated by how her holes manage to keep rebounding to their pristine state and has to try increasingly rougher methods of streching them. But that's just my opinion write what you like.
Crossroadmk2? crossroad mark 2? Hmmm Lara and her entire troupe accounted for? Check. Strong femdom villain in control of Lara? Check. Lara giving herself up to slavery? Check. Could that be crossroaddeamon has returned triumphantly?! If so glad you're back. I've been hoping to see your work again. I'm so mad at myself for not saving lara sells herself into slavery. If you do still have a copy is there a chance you could send it my way? Irregularless this is looking like it could shape up to be a lot better! Hope to see more soon.
Very hot, I loved the fisting. Hope for more of that. And Lara should be offered to her horses. Hope to read more soon.
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