Reviews for The Scandalous Adventures Of Professor Croft

BY : CrossroadsMk2


  • From TR_FAN on May 23, 2020

    Chapter 3 I found more fun than Chapter 2.

    I can't help myself but I can't find Lara Croft here as her character, but as a crazy naive high school girl. I miss her authority here, bad ass character. It's like ying and yang. When her bad ass character doesn't work, there's no excitement about her humiliation. Just my opinion of course. Lara Croft fans have different visions about her.

    The beginning with a swimsuit is good, you managed to build an erotic atmosphere with humiliation. It would be fun if the calendar with Lara was mentioned somewhere later in the story. On the other hand maybe just if you write at the beginning that Lara wears four swimsuit models, you steal to the reader surprise because he immediately expects four models and it can be a monotonous reading. I think it is very important to build up expectations and surprises here. Yes of course, there were four types of swimsuit, but we expected from the beginning that if the first are decent, the fourth will be lewd. Maybe it would be good to interrupt it with something we don't expect. But I think tha the good surprise was the return of Gordon Davis on the scene. I like to see Lara Croft with a man, on the contrary, I don't like when she has to listen and is blackmailed by stupid spoiled young girls. I don't see her as Lara Croft. And that's my problem with the story. Despite that the chapter closing part was fun.



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  • From SailorNemesis on May 03, 2020

    Chap2, sexy stuff.  Not the direction I was expecting the story to go but I enjoyed it.  Hopefully the sorority has a large, canine mascot.  Also would like to read plenty of fisting. Looking forward to next chap.



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  • From Extraction on May 01, 2020

    much better than your previous work i think



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  • From Manic_Seeker on April 16, 2020

    Love it so far! Can't wait to see some more.



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  • From Harbinger_Of_Kaos on April 14, 2020

    Well, this is interesting, though I won't deny that I hope this one ends on a happier note than the other one where she lost everything.



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  • From SailorNemesis on April 14, 2020

    Good start.  Sexy stuff!



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  • From TR_FAN on April 13, 2020

    Finally something about Professor Croft :-)

    Very interesting story. Your writing is very successful here. Seduction and character feelings are very important I think. Also blackmail can be very fun, but please keep her Countess status and her name. I think Lara is more attractive if she is still nobly haughty and arrogant while doing all these perverse things. Once she becomes a dirty bitch and loses her manor, staff, and more, she feels to me like an uninteresting ordinary woman. If she has her perverse behavior as a secret it's far more fun. Let me give you an example. If Batman and Bruce Wayne are seen as two different characters by other people, it's very fun. Once his identity is revealed, it feels like a complete end of fun. So if you keep Lara Croft still as the top company woman (11th Countess), and she will do all those nasty things like gloryhole sex is, it is great. But as soon as others know it's Lara Croft, it's over.

    And about your previous work. Don't be angry but the last chapter of Natla's Revenge didn't seem very interesting to me. Removing the name Lara Croft (now Lara Jones), plastic surgery and other things have undermined her attractiveness.

    But this is just my point of view, you is the author and your new story is very good I think.

    And here is new version of my comics:

    https://e-hentai.org/g/1608778/496f14f925/

    I added chapter 3 (gangbang) and now I'm working on the final chapter.



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