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Reviews for Tainted Eyes

By : HotaruReborn

From ANON - Crystal Cat-chan on December 15, 2004
Ah hah! It makes much more sens now. Loved the ending! Still a great story, though it dosen't have as many gut-wrnching point in it as the other one ((The Sceens with Seph and Vince still haunt me, they're so amazing)) As for the Kingdom Hearts re-write, only is you play Ansem as well as you did Livion, who was amazingly evil. I think Ansem has the same ability to be that evil within him. And I would like to see you play with it. I'd read it either way of course, amazing story. Keep it up!
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From ANON - Crystal Cat-chan on December 14, 2004
I'm vaughly confused, is the story supossed to end with Sephiroth casting Phiniox? Or did a chapter get deleated along the way? Please E-mail me if there is more, as I really do desire closure for this story. It's a really good story. Dark, Twisted, and Almost Mind Boggling at times, but good, very good. If Riku is Pure Light, how is it he can be possed by Livion? *Still puzzled, and feeling like she didn't read the entire thing* Oh well, good story, I hope to see a Sequel. Later Days.
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From ANON - Me on December 06, 2004
I have to say i read this fic months and months ago, i even read it twice i love it so much, everything you say about riku, i truly believe he hgas always been my favourate character, personally i always though sora to be weak...but thats just me, in the actaul game im actaully annoyed that we dont get to play riku as the keyblade master, but apparently in kingdom hearts 2 that comes out over in england march 2005 sometime, hes a kick ass character! i just cant wait! (till we set sail) lol. So anyway i just want to thank you for this story, i will always remeber it. (I know i sound really sentemental, but i really cant help it, lol)
So thank you!
:D

Me xxx
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From ANON - AngelStarFire_Hikarist on October 10, 2004
oops... sorry about that. Hit enter before I was done...

Anyway... I guess that I just wanted to tell you how much I truely enjoyed this story... *glomps* I would love to save it to my hard drive, if that's okay with you. ^^ 'Cause I never want to lose track of it!!!
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From ANON - AngelStarFire_Hikarist on October 10, 2004
Holy shit... I can't tell you how much this fic actually affected me... I was crying in the last fhapthapters... the way you described each of the characters and how they felt as they fell through the doors... especially Vincent, Cloud and Sephiroth... damn. I was crying for about five minutes... and then when you went to the part where people were coming back through the door on the islands, there was a really bad ache in my chest when Wakka started talking about what Riku had done... it could have been heartburn, but I doubt it. ;)

Anyway... The details in this story were fantastic... I don't believe I've seen so much pointless smut in one fic before... okay, it wasn't pointless, but there was a lot of it. ^_^ I enjoyed every minute though... the torture scenes had me wincing, and I felt soo sorry for Riku for most of this thing... lol. I really felt for the characters, which basically means you did a really, really, REALLY good job on this fic... Yad mad my emotions on a real roller coaster, which yet again proves what a wonderful job you did on this... you can bet that I'll be reading pretty much anything else you write. ^^

The story was very enrapturing... I had to read straight through it because I didn't want to stop..! It's now four in the morning, just to prove a point. ^^ Took me roughly three hours to read... maybe four, I can't really remember when I started. lol.
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From ANON - Sugar 'n' Spice on September 27, 2004
This story is incrediable. I absolutely love it. I am a major fan of Kairi (dont hold it against me) but even I wanted to see her tortured and killed by Sora, Riku and everyone else. I hope you will write more Kingdom Hearts stories, because this one is so good.
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From ANON - whowantstoknow on August 29, 2004
uhhhh.... if u ever do another story dont have so much fucking rape in it, jesus christ!!!!!
but uh all-in-all it was okay. i didnt like the gayness between sora and riku, they have enough of those already. Write more! u have a very disgusting,disturbed, strange image about kingdom hearts.
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From ANON - Kasota on August 07, 2004
I just wanted to let you know that this...was probably...the MOST awesome fic I've read on this sight. It's at least up there in the top couple. It was so great and not just senseless porn that people seem to be prone to write (which is okay, so don't take offense THOSE people...lol) This just had so deep a plot and so much work and thought behind it I was honestly amazed by it. It's definately going in my RecReading list, and I'm making a vast majority of my friends and buddies read it as well, so don't be surprised if you see a multitude of new reviews and such pouring in. Seriously...This was awesome, there were no major discrepencies or flaws or anything, you did a very very nice job and I'll definately be watching out for you. Thanks for the great read.
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From ANON - Hailz on April 28, 2004
Me Again...Just waiting for a chapter update on Eternal Fall, and I figured its about time to review here! XD This was the first one out of your fics I read...Couldnget get it out of mind..Read it in one go...SOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!! Wow. One thing I really loved about about Tainted Eyes was how even though you didn't have AerisXCloud as a couple, you didn't portray the other one as really horrible and hate-able. You know...lol I can't explain what I'm getting at... But I just thought it was really swell how Aeris could be with Zack, and Cloud could be Sep Sephy with them all being such great characters at the same time...'Cause ya know...Other authors get all petty and will purposely make a character be all heinous and hated just because they don't like the thought of them being coupled with their fave character..Am I ranting? I apologise...I hope I got my point across without sounding like too much of a retard XD By the way, I love all the couplings you have in your fic...^_^ Oh oh...Everyones so brave and noble...and admirable...YAY!! This fics so dark and so rewarding...OH YOUR JUST SO AWESOME!! *glomps*
~Hailz
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From ANON - arora_kayd on April 19, 2004
I really enjoyed fic fic. it took a while to read but it was well worth it. You're cliff hangers were great. and i loved how you portrayed characters specially Seph and Riku. i agree with you on ur comments about Riku in ch. 20 He's not evil. and i thought it was great how the story turned out to be a prequil. i suck at reviews so i'm just gonna say i loved the story. can't wait for sequils and i'll definety have to read your ff7 fic!
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From ANON - Rathi on April 05, 2004
What happened to Sora being Keyblade master too? Is he gonna save the day at all?

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From ANON - Rathi on April 05, 2004
This is utterly....creepy. But its fantastically good. Bravo!
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From ANON - Tornado on March 17, 2004
Before this fanfiction, I hadn't really enjoyed reading much yaoi, but the way you wrote and detailed every aspect made everything a fun read. The fact that you made this a prequel to Kingdom Hearts which ties into the game itself is outstanding. Definitely waiting for whatever you write next! I have to ask though, since you had M/M pairings and M/F pairings, why not any F/F pairings?
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From ANON - DeeBee on March 10, 2004
Well, I'll admit, I was raising my squick shields when I read the description, but once I started it I had to read it through.

You are a goddess, and I must worship you. *bowsmuchly*

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From ANON - kai.zer on March 08, 2004
speechless, that's what i am.

this is an astounding story. and i'm really glad you wrote riku out like this. not dissing sora (though i dislike him for some reason) or anything though.

you had me going on some chapters, especially when the page is loading -slowly- i like the portrayals you've done for all characters. and i especially like selphie's part in the garden. it was a terribly touching moment, and extremely sad too x_x; d00d. if this actually happens before KH, riku took the brunt of it all, man. poor bishie, he's my fave bishie of all. and GAH. some of the lemon scenes were just TOO painful >_O!! *winces cringes* but those didn't deter me to stop finding out the ending. and i'm glad i didn't stop reading.

i'm a little disappointedthe the ending though. not that it was bad or rushed, or anything like that. it just seemed unresolved since after this story line, we jump right into KH. and i feel like you should write more, as if after the KH story *coughsequelcough*

livion is a sexy name, by the w

*worships worships*
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