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Reviews for Tainted Eyes

By : HotaruReborn
  • From ANON - I LOVE CLOUD! on December 12, 2003
    YES! UPDATED! UPDATED! UPDATE AGAIN! UPDATE AGAIN!
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  • From ANON - Suicide Jane on December 12, 2003
    oh yea, so im guessing that the young man with the pretty eyes is the one who knows Aeris, Cloud and Sephiroth... hrm... who could it be. amazing how this ff and kh stuff goes. wow.
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  • From ANON - Suicide Jane on December 12, 2003
    that was the shit right there. wow wh twi twist of events. keep up the good work. nice touch with the hallow baostion stuff too. truly.
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  • From ANON - Caska Almasy on December 12, 2003
    Poor Bastion he didn't deserve that. Now who could be the person who is thinking about Aeris, Cloud and Sephiroth? Thats a toughie.................maybe it's Zack that would be cool. Oh well I'll just have to wait for the next chapter. UPDATE SOON or I'll get angry :P
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  • From ANON - I LOVE CLOUD! on December 11, 2003
    I'm going to go insaaaaaaaaaaaane! Update! Update! Dark...Angsty...GOOD! AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! I thrive on your story! It's my life! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - Callisto on December 10, 2003
    ................WHOA! this is surely something... Livion has a heart? ^_^
    Couldnt see that one coming, hehe
    Whee this is getting SOOO good, MAN can't wait for more!
    aw continue soon ok?
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  • From ANON - Caska Almasy on December 10, 2003
    another really good chapter!!!!!! i think its great that the story is not just about Riku and Sora anymore but also Squall, Sephiroth, Vincent and Cloud and ofcourse Aeris but I never really liked her :P I hope you update soon. (you better!)

    Love
    Caska
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  • From ANON - Auryn Kaia on December 08, 2003
    About the cliffhangers: one of those lives being ruined would definately be mi It It's enough to give a person a nervous twitch, waiting oh-so-impatiently to see what happens next. And the deaths of Livion's three compatriates...totally out of left field. What a plot twist! Never would have seen thae coe coming in a trillion years. And you carried it off so nicely, too. Anyway, just wanted to say, I'm still enjoying the story very much (except for the cliffhangers, naturally). Keep those chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Rose Vicious on December 07, 2003
    Dude... Thats all I can say is dude... This story is so intense but could see it happening if Kingdom Hearts wasn't a disney video game. The story line is so perfect, so great. Even though I'm not even done it I though I'd write this before I become compleatly speachless. Even though alot of it... is... sick... But its so interesting at the same time, like some sick fantasy you wouldn't want to speak to with anyone. Like Kairis fantasy, something you wish for no one to know, till she broke. You know... She always did seem a little to innocent... I could see her being a compleate whore, I really can. And the way to describe every character is perfect, everything is set exacatly to the characters. I could even have dreams of one of my Kingdom Hearts characters fitting into this story... But would you call those dreams or nightmares? Thats a good question. It brings so many ideas to my mind, kind of wishing I could recreate this story and add my own character. That would make it interesting, lol. But I couldn't do that without writers permission of course. That would like taking someones copy write. But its funny, a fanfic, of a fanfic, even better. lol. But yet again, great story.
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  • From ANON - OMG on December 05, 2003
    more..More..MORE!!!! OMG HURRY YOUR KILLIN ME HERE
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  • From ANON - Suicide Jane on December 05, 2003
    you have a real talent for writing. and the story line is easy to follow. its so nice to finally read something i can get into
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  • From ANON - Callisto on December 04, 2003
    oh....my.......WAAI this was good ^_^ Ah continue soon,
    poor Sephy-sama T_T he was SOO sweet...

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  • From ANON - Caska Almasy on December 03, 2003
    THANK YOU you didn't kill Sora. I LOVE YOU!!!! I never expected to see Sephiroth in this story but i ver very good that you put him in it. At first I thought Yuffie was Clouds secret friend but Sephiroth is better :P Poor Riku he has been through so much in such little time I feel really sorry for him. When are you going to kill that stupid slut Kairi??? hehe sorry just had to ask I can't stand her! Very good chapter nice cliffhanger aswell I can't wait for the next chapter but I have to :( update soon!!

    Love
    Caska
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  • From ANON - Caska Almasy on December 01, 2003
    This is really good! I have never read a KH story that was this good. I'm really curious about what is going to happen next so you better update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love
    Caska
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  • From ANON - Kate on November 29, 2003
    Oh wow. Your first fanfic?! This is absolutely wonderful, and coming along so beautifully. Your chapters end in a way that makes me want to pull out my hair and beg to know what's going to happen, especially Chapter 13. Poor kawaii lil Sora trying to defend his love... I also liked how you threw in the other Final Fantasy characters. Mmm, Vincent and Squall. ^_^ I do hope we'll be able to see Selphie, Tidus, and Wakka again. I love those guys.

    Oh, by the way! If you'd like someone to be your beta, just hit me on AIM (SN is 'Spicy Gambit') or MSN (the__kate@hotmail.com) ^-^
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