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Reviews for Tainted Eyes

By : HotaruReborn
  • From ANON - Callisto on November 28, 2003
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Sora * dies together with him * Okay, he was evil for awhile but he don't derserve this!
    aghh why did you kill him : Sniffle :
    Continue soon, while i continue to cry ^_-
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  • From ANON - Callisto on November 25, 2003
    yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayness! another chapter!

    ACK SORA * smacks him in the face * now return to normal, idiot! you're hurting Riku!!!! T_T
    And i still hate Kairi! :P

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Syrup on November 24, 2003
    Wow...this is very impressive. It's like you've taken all the aspects of darkness in reality that Disney was too afraid to put into the game. Plus seeing Vincent in chapter ten made me squeal like the fangirl I am. :D You're writing style is very clean, I just spotted a couple errors, the kind spell-checker can make if you're not too careful with it. One careful proof-reading can take care of those. I'd also like to applaude you for not making this story sound clichéd given the subject matter. On a less serious note: after eleven chapters of so much character abuse, I'm really looking forward to seeing some justice dealt out to Livion. X3
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  • From ANON - Auryn Kaia on November 22, 2003
    Gah! You have got to stop ending your chapters in such cliffhangers! Seriously, it's torture. Although, I suppose that would be appropriate to the story, in some weirdly logical way... But it's still not nice! Please, please, please, update SOON! I'm just dying to see what happens next. And such an unexpected twist, what happened with Sora. Keep it coming! ~Kaia
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  • From ANON - Callisto on November 22, 2003
    .........I have a hard time not to kill you -_- hehe! ^_^
    Aw poor Sora! I hoped he would kill Kairi but too bad, she's still alive

    another chapter well done!
    can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Callisto on November 18, 2003
    0.0 oh my, it's gettin' better and better!
    YAY! Cloud's in the story yay he's my fav character ^_^
    Keep the updates coming!

    Oh there is one thing confusing me.... You said several times * keyblade master * to
    Riku... but Sora is a keyblade master too, right? >.< me is confused...
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  • From ANON - Seda on November 16, 2003
    oeeewwww this is good, nice written! me want more!
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  • From ANON - Red_eyed_demon on November 16, 2003
    * blows Kairi up *
    aaaah i feel much better now, heehee

    update soon! and plz keep Sora alive
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  • From ANON - Liebchen on November 14, 2003
    Kairi you Bitch!!! I hate her! Why can´t you kill her?? Please just kill her! Her and Livion and his men... please bring Selphie, Tidus and Wakka back!! I wuv them so much...
    Oh, and when Livion or any of his men dares to touch Squall, Xell, Seifer or anyone else (Espasilly Riku or Sora) I´m going to kill them!! I swear!
    Please go on!! This is really one of the best storys I´ve ever read...

    ~~Liebchen~~
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  • From ANON - Callisto on November 14, 2003
    of course we can bare with it, we have too hehe ^_^ Great chappie!

    oh and plz..........DON'T KILL SORA!!!!
    i know i kind of hate in him in the game for
    being so annoying and childish..V_V...but in you're story he's cool and he doesn't
    derserve(?) to die...

    update soon! can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Kaika on November 13, 2003
    Poor Riku, I winced reading that last chapter. So, Sora will be jumping into the story soon? Woot!
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  • From ANON - Callisto on November 10, 2003
    waaiiiii! So good! heh, i really starting to like this, and i'm surely going to follow this to the end!

    Sora's coming along soon? YAY I hope Sora cuts Livion into pieces with his micky mouse keyblade ( yea right!
    like that will scare Livion ) ¬_¬

    Oh well, continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kaika on November 08, 2003
    Nice, keep going. Oooo... does Sora help Riku in anyway?
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  • From ANON - Lunare on November 08, 2003
    Poor Riku. Please update soon. *chibified* Me wanna know what happens! Your story is gooood^^ . I hope that Sora and Riku can escape... but what about Kairi? 'n Selphie, Tidus and Wakka?! Wah, update!
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  • From ANON - Red_eyed_demon on November 07, 2003
    OMG...... Selphie, wakka, Tidus 0_0

    Update soon!
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