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Reviews for To Forgive

By : Robofetus
  • From ANON - BlueSiren on October 05, 2006
    This second chapter felt a bit rushed. Oh it was very good, but I thought it could have been explored so much more especially the part when at the river, when Ashley bathed Sidney I could have been so erotic. I guess I just love detail too much. Great Job though!!
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  • From ANON - BlueSiren on October 05, 2006
    This first chapter was exeptional, I've only played the game recently and fell in love with it's characters, especially Sidney. I cannot wait to read what comes next. I love how you incorporate real elements of the game, like armor and cure roots and such into the story, it gives it a feeling of realness (for lack of a better word) Since you wrote this so long ago, you might not even read this review, but I still think your work deserves praise. The only thing I could see were a few minor errors, but not even worth fixing.
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  • From ANON - sakurazukamori6 on August 24, 2006
    Dear god, this was the most beautifully written fanfic I've ever run across. You have an amazing talent here. The characters were so developed and their dialogue flowed so naturally. Your descriptions are breathtaking. I've read this story atleast ten times over and all I have to say is Wow! I bow to you now. I know I'm not commenting on specific things here, but...everything was so perfect. Your writing reminds me of orchestral music, all the little things you do, all the little details, they all just add up into something so grand and magnificent and exquisite. I'll stop now. But this is...okay I need to go sit down. Wait I am sitting down. I guess your writing makes me feel floaty and happy. Thank you so much for the amazing read.
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  • From ANON - Annie on February 11, 2005
    ...;_;

    Congratulations on writing the most beautiful VS fanfic I have *ever* read. That was absolutely wonderfully brilliant! XD

    Thank you ever so much ^^

    -Annie
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  • From ANON - Autumn Sacura on January 20, 2005
    Damn, this is the best fic ever!
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  • From ANON - Naria on November 23, 2004
    O.O O.O....


    I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    That was the best story I've read in a very long time!! The only words to describe it: Beautiful, enchanting, and real. Oh yeah, that was sooooooooooooooooo...I can't describe in words how it makes me feel!! YES! YES! YES!! Taht's about all I CAN SAY ABOUT IT!! I love this story!! It makes me want to scream for joy and cry with happiness!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!! I am so pumped up right now! Yowza!! Great, fabulous..mrph!!!! *GLOMP* GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^________^

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    Oh my gawd! I want to see that happen...This story made perfect sense and, yeah!! Honestly, my favorite part was in the very beginning, when Ashley's healing Sydney's back...^_^ And then of course, Sydney's song! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! So cuuuute and sweet and YAY!! Alright, you are now my favorite person...So here's more glompage!! *glomp*glomp*uberglomp* Yeah, I'm gonna go now before I freak you out!
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  • From ANON - Cidsa on September 24, 2004
    Wow! I have barely the words to describe how much I enjoyed reading this.
    You are incredibly skilled at writing and all the sex doesn't seem over the top, it honestly seems completely natural.

    You are a very skilled writer and I hope you continue to create wonderful stories like this for us all to read. :3
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  • From ANON - Razielslittleflamekaat on April 02, 2004
    To lazy to log in as usual. I love vagrant story uber much. it kept mne tne the first year I went to college when I was living all by my self. This was uber sweet and good. I should hope that there is more ~_~ have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - Guenhwyvar on January 20, 2004
    I've played Vagrant Story several times over, and this really feels like it expands on where the game finished. Does it end here, or is there more to come?
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