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Reviews for Time Out

By : ShannonLove
  • From ANON - SFXD1991 on October 09, 2015
    Ooooh I like this! When will you update? :3
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  • From ANON - Shadow fan on November 08, 2005
    One more thing. If you have someone older than you that's living with you, ask them for help on your story. If you keep going, at least have Shadow screw Rouge the bat. THINK OF SOMETHING THAT'S INTERESTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shadow fan on November 08, 2005
    The person Above me is right. Put some intrest in your stories. Where is the sex. HELLO. ADULTFANFICTION. Gotta have it. You need to work on your STORIES!!!!
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  • From ANON - Speedlight on February 11, 2005
    Shannon. YOU. SUCK. AT. WRITING.

    I have trouble believing you're over the age of twelve. You have HORRID writing skills. All three stories I've seen of yours(if there's more, God my eyes are afraid to read them) are awful. You don't even describe what is going on. You simply write a little summary. Seems like someone didn't pay attention in English class. Or hasn't even gone to Englush class yet, because they're not even in middle school yet.

    The only good thing about your three stories is, the fact that it doesn't include your shitty, unoriginal Sonic fancharacter. I'm glad you didn't use any fan characters, for that matter, except for that Brad person in one of your stories. However, everyone in your stories is OUT OF CHARACTER, and BADLY.

    I'd also like to note, Jesus CHRIST, woman, ROBOTS CANNOT FEEL LUST. They're fucking ROBOTS. ____ROBOTS._____ Got that through your thick, prepubescent head yet?!

    GOOD.

    Now go on and draw a sad littly angsty depressing picture at the Team Artail Oekaki about how upset you are because I criticized you. :'( *Sniff*
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  • From ANON - Crazy Ivan on September 07, 2004
    Zee osh snof bitch! Nice...
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  • From ANON - on September 06, 2004
    ???
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  • From ANON - Demon King on March 05, 2004
    It's a good start. Get to work on th next chapter.
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  • From ANON - KamirineGoddess on February 24, 2004
    Darn you! Update this story! ::Cries::

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  • From ANON - Saria, The Game Fan on February 15, 2004
    This is good, so far. HURRY UP AND FINISH IT, GODDAMNIT!
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