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Reviews for Mental Kombat

By : deathwish
  • From Deadlocke on March 30, 2011
    Woo. This was good...but kind of a depressing ending. Man, talk about a major status-drop for Kitana; from noble, shining princess to pregnant, mind-controlled whore, lol. Shen Kuanghan (nice job on the unique name) came off as real arrogant, although that was probably intentional. He must be pretty powerful to able to control such badass women, and destroy the nads of gods, lol. I guess its kind of fitting that Tanya was his first victim. I've always pictured her as the slowest of the females, lol. Anyway, good story, I just thought the ending could have been a little better.
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  • From Psyknight on September 05, 2010
    This is really good, it should be continued. I wish you would have described Kitana and Shen having sex in detail.
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  • From UzumakiIno on December 11, 2008
    Very nice.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire17 on July 08, 2003
    That was really good and I'm glad to see Shinnok got what he deserved in the endeep eep up the good
    Sap
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  • From ANON - Officer Doofy on March 29, 2003
    Hot hot hot HOT HOT HOT HOT! All I can say is it was hot HOT HOT! This is a great story! Mortal Kombat should be more like this! HOT!
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  • From ANON - Judas on January 25, 2003
    Aaahhh............ what was the point!? What was the point?? *sobs*

    Your grammer and spelling is f but but the plot.... =( So pointless.....
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